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Click hereDamn you
Damn you one and all
Tired of your childish games
Sick of hearing how you care
Lies and lies and lies again
More untruths for me to swallow
Only love I crave
That which you do not offer
Kink and lust
The name of your game
I gave you what you crave
Do you reciprocate
I think not
YOU, you know who you are
The one that thrills me
Passion unleashed
Undeniable ecstasy
And love, even, possibly
Wanting more
I wait patiently
Forgiving your trespasses
Against me
Just remember
When I am gone
And you are alone
That I was here
Being patient and consistent
You need to keep with the same rythum of the stanzas. Break your rythumn for effect with the "You," next line "You are ...."
It would convey the feel better.
Other than that I liked it.
(Okay okay I have felt the same sentiment shere in my home)