What Was Your Day Like?

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So tell me
What was your day like?

While I sat here
Thinking of every malcontent
Action, and reaction
That I have made

Wondering if you ever even noticed
How much I've done for you?

So tell me
What was your day like?

While I mourned here
Weeping for times past
Crying for our misgivings
Screaming out

Wondering if you ever even noticed
How much I've done for you?

So tell me
WHAT WAS YOUR DAY LIKE!?

While I DIED here

Because there's only so much

Wondering if you ever even noticed
How much I've done for you

I can do before

Wondering if you ever even noticed
How much I've done for you

Becomes commonplace

And no longer fills my hours

Because I haven't heard from you in months.

So tell me

What was your day like?

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
*****

A cry for recognition and appreciation. Well done. You might flesh it out with a bit more depth but the emotion comes through loud and clear.

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