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Click hereWhy can't I just be happy?
Life is not that bad
So why does it hurt so?
Disappointment, rejection
Takes away the hope.
- COMMENTS
twelveoonealmost 13 years agoFirst, that is the wrong time to write poetry.
The second, you didn't, you wrote a journal entry.
Take these as you will, the third, it is always easier to get the audience to really feel something with concrete words words that describe a physical reality, you have none here. The standard cliche "Show don't tell" . I did not vote.
