tagNon-Erotic PoetryWomen's weakness

Women's weakness

byLesseloovesPeter©

Every woman’s a sucker for a good love story
even the hardest, most cynical ladies’ heart
buried under years of oppression and repression
can’t pass up the bubbling flips of intestinal intuition
the quickened pulse as eyes lock
the gentle tug between her legs
sing her a song, write her a poem
make her the center of your universe
and watch her facade fade
as she tumbles
mind and body
into the pages of her love story

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by killamaiden06/26/14

where are you

Cool story

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by Oldbear6311/17/13

Yessssssss.

Again Lesse. So true, so much said with so few words. Hopefully they learn to judge sincerity

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by Ashesh911/16/13

Lesse

Women's strength or Women's attribute , then ?

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by LesseloovesPeter11/16/13

I'm not sure I like this one. I mean, is this really women's weakness? I liked the poem and had a hard time editing because it says what I wanted yet I don't like what it says. Undecided on this one, Imore...

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