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susansnowsusansnowalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Oldbear

Thanks for getting that. rawr?

Oldbear63Oldbear63about 10 years ago
My thought was - who is she sending a message to?

That was cool.

susansnowsusansnowabout 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

I thought to post something short, sweet, provocative, and generally pleasing. The idea of clicking on a title and then being given a message that could or could not be for the reader just kind of tickled me. I like that it teeters the line between divination and the cliche. As if everyone reading wonders who the author could really be and perhaps even question whether or not you know said writer. That was my goal anyway. Love it or hate it, (that is the question) either way you're still focused on the piece with either of those strong emotions. Thanks so much for feedback.

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 10 years ago
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Well it's to the point with no wasted words :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Absence of originality, substance, effort and anything that could be considered poetical would suggest the score was more Appropriate and less Shitty.

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