Your Eyes

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roc1knight almost 4 years ago

Comparing lover's eyes with pools is a special metaphor. But when we read "everlasting embrace", we will know that are indulge and swimmy the poet wants to express.

LeBroz about 17 years ago

Nice description of looking into those eyes but again, would have been helped by a careful edit.

Amyfriend about 17 years ago

The eyes are so special...

and you're really captured the various feelings in very descriptive words..

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