- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Your Eyes
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Eyes are the windows to the soul
At least that’s what they say
In yours I see the sunshine
That brightens my every day
They sparkle when you smile
They glisten when you cry
They darken when you’re angry
Even if you don’t know why
Your eyes touch me
In ways you never knew
But I’m telling you this now
So that you finally do
- COMMENTS
BedtimeStories77almost 17 years agoI think this poem is touching. Perhaps "windows to the soul" is a slight cliché when describing eyes, but it is still very heartfelt and true! It's a very beautiful sentiment and I've been known to use it myself. *blush* lol
I loved the poem hon. Keep up the good work and I hope you rock Survivor!
~Eve
Tangerine Sex Dreamabout 17 years agoEyes are the windows to the soul..."
Could you have chosen a line that has been used and over-used ad nauseum?
you can do better, I have read some of you work tha is "better"... this, well...
a 2 is generous...
LeBrozabout 17 years agoGetting lost in his eyes and telling him too make all you have all that much more special.
Amyfriendabout 17 years ago"Eyes are the windows to the soul. At least that’s what they say."...well done.
AnaLeePleasuredabout 17 years agoI love eyes. They are definitely windows to the soul. You can see everything in someone's eyes. Nice read.
