Yours, mine, ours

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leahcarr
leahcarr
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My nails rake
insistent rivers,
your fingers trace
teasing trails of fire.
My voice cries out
a litany of promises.
Yours screams my name
like a prayer, an oath,
a plea.

I need you like I need
air to fill my lungs.
I feel your desire
like a tidal wave;
a tangible caress,
a wondrous thing to hold
and see and touch.
It fills me, as you do.
A perfect fit,
like coming home;
a consuming warmth
all around me.

My heart beats to the rhythm
you play upon me,
and you play me
expertly.
Your every stroke
a work of art,
weaving music
out of passion.

leahcarr
leahcarr
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leahcarrleahcarrabout 11 years agoAuthor

Thank you everyone who has read my poems! Please leave or send comments, it's so wonderful to get feedback and encouragement. I hope that you enjoy them as much as I do :)

I am working on several stories, and hope to have some beginnings up soon. New poems should be up semi regularly, as I have been inspired rather often recently.

demure101demure101about 11 years ago
Very pleasant

and nice imagery.

Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
Weaving poetry....

Out of passion.... enjoyed it... Thanks...QQ

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 11 years ago
liked enough to recommend you

for what it's worth - do write more - carve your own niche.

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 11 years ago
Very passionate

I rather liked the final stanza. S.O