- Non-Erotic Poetry
- ZMP ~ bones over stones
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A long walk through a life asleep and awaken
self forged and tempered by bone over stone
in time measured by growth sprouts and era
a gray sponge to knowledge and memories
slicing through the air, slowly we go
following the direction of our insight
contemplated thoughts like an ant in the universe
accumilation of all we know, did and dream
brushing souls like the wind over a flower
till our last breath is taken for affinity
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 18 years agoFor me, this makes no sense, "growth sprouts and era" Do you mean growth spurts? And I don't get how you're using era in this line. You need better line breaks or punctuation. (accumulation)
Anonymousover 18 years agomany through time and how the roads do intersect..is amazing...enjoyed as always ~A~....smiles/blue
Scott N. Leavittover 18 years agoI say so to!!! & this is good to. But I like the old tree best!!!
Jennifer Cover 18 years agotwo ZMPs in one day ~
arent we the lucky ones!...lol
I really liked this when I saw
it in ya thread and I still like
it now!
Thanks
~ Jenn ~ the gusher <wink>
