ZMP~ Mind the Stone

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Mind the Stone
that sharpens the mind
a used tool needs
it's sharpening time.

I dabbled in a thought
that was about my life,
found my self wrestling
within my own mind.

Like sawing at wood
with a dull knife
I couldn't cut-out
this turmoil inside.

So I closed my eyes
and drew a deep breath
drawing on all that I
have learned until now.

Then released it slowly
like an unraveling knot
I pushed as much of me
out of the air that I could.

I drew a deeper breath
that drove into my mind
like a blade across stone
a focused thought grinds.

I pushed the air out
that forged before me
like the minds hone,
mentally sharpening.

My eyes still closed
another breath I drew
like a newborn's first
I open my eyes, new.

Facing the world
in which I have grown
I see more clearly
when I Mind the Stone.

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 19 years ago
**5**

Another work well done inspiring thoughtfulness; a challenge to all, a lost quest to a few.

Scott N. LeavittScott N. Leavittalmost 19 years ago
**5**

Wow!!! An other GREAT ZEN Master Poem. Thankyou ZEN Master ART!!

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Another gem

I really enjoy your

ZMP poetry Art and this

was another beauty of a

poem, a really lovely

read.

thanks.

~ J

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
loved it.......

and this is the spot i claim as my favorite of the piece........

Mind the Stone

that sharpens the mind

a used tool needs

it's sharpening time.

*******

this really flowed nice all the way through.......don

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
breathing

today makes yesterday go away for sure...lots of power in this piece. peace/blue