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Click hereIf there were only one flower
left in this world
with no possible means
of pollination,
it's obvious demise
a certainty.
Still it's bloom will unfold
without worry of it's end
greeting each moment
as if it just began,
The last flower song.
that is sooo sad!! and so romantic... i truly enjoy how you think, it is obvious that you actually put effort and much thought into your work, it is a pleasure to read you, everytime :)
I can tell you love being outside in it all because you write about it so naturally--and yet it's a very introspective poem. Very Zen, yes. And you're editing them, you sly dog. I can tell that, too. :D
Really nice, 'as if it just began'
This flower has other tools besides a hammer.
as the shortness of a lovely haiku...with blossoms....well versed...blue
Way to go Art
I find that your talents are forming nicely.
You have grown as a poet and this write shows
that your poetic nature shines. Keep up the
wonderful writing and I will look forward to
reading your writes.