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"Last chance to say no," he whispered.
Alessandra picked up her tired arms and wrapped them around his shoulders. He sensed the fire in her. He saw it in her eyes. "Fuck me," she groaned.
Looking her right in the eye, Jamie stabbed his cock all the way into her, unrelentingly. He groaned feeling the pristine flesh part under his onslaught. Alessandra tightened up in expectation of the horrid pain of deflowering, but felt none. The new sensations inside her body were uncomfortable, but definitely not painful. Jamie stilled inside of her and just reveled in the feel of her wet, tight cavern, pressing in on him from all sides at once with the sweetest of heat.
He lowered his face and kissed her. He used his tongue to explore each and every part of her mouth and then kissed her face and went around to nibble on her ear and then kissed his way back into her mouth. During all this, he sensed her need rise. His hard meat inside of her was starting to feel good and she was eager for more, but he kept kissing her and holding them both still, until she reached the point of frustration.
Then Jamie began to slowly slide out, making her gasp and squeal plaintively. He stroked in and out of her body, looking down at her face as she shut her eyes and concentrated on the phenomenal sensations welling up inside of her body. He sensed she liked quick and shallow thrusts and he delivered. He fucked her and felt his own orgasm coming on strong. With the last of his strength and concentration, he modified the angle of his strokes to give her maximum stimulation. He felt his balls tighten and his breath hitch. The heat was rising from his belly.
Alessandra came with a strangled cry that petered out into a series of staccato moans. The shuddering grasps of her pussy along his shaft sent Jamie over the edge as well and the two of them came together for a timeless moment. He held himself over her as he enjoyed the aftershocks of her orgasm upon his softening shaft. He watched his sweat drip down on her face as she still hadn't come down from her high. With her cute face scrunched up in ecstasy, she looked heartrendingly beautiful to him. When she finally relaxed and opened her eyes, she shuddered feeling him slip out of her. She looked long and hard into his eyes. Then she opened her mouth and stuck her tongue out.
Jamie looked at her in puzzlement, for a moment, before he saw a drop of his sweat fall off him and onto her tongue. She tasted it and moaned. He smiled, kissed her in their shared afterglow and then lay down beside her. She pulled up the sheet around their cooling bodies and spooned into his arms. He put an arm around her and felt her breathing. He realized he had lost track of her emotions during sex, but paid it no mind. He sensed her blissfully drifting off to sleep. The Sun hadn't yet set outside, but he felt the call of Sandman himself. He didn't have his magically enhanced sexual stamina anymore.
As he drifted off to dreamland for a brief nap, the doubts started coming back and whispering of all the ways things could go wrong after today's events. He didn't really care about all of that. All that he knew for certain, as he squeezed Alessandra tighter in his arms, was that he was definitely done with celibacy.
- COMMENTS
sycksyckoover 9 years agoAuthorSorry, the fetishes are not a deus ex machina, or a plot hole. They are a plot point. Read on to find out the truth about them!
Anonymousover 9 years agoAs everyone before me said...
Very nice turn to the story...
Please keep up your powerful work!
I like it A LOT!
jpz007ahrenover 9 years agoIf you're trying to make an argument about ex-machina, the table is more of one than the fetish. Afro-man worked with a lot of different people, him having that piece made sense in a way. As for her finding that specific one, its explained by the definition of the table. First she wanted a general investigation of it, after finding its complexity, why not ask if there was something to aid with communication next.
Anywhose, its not that big a deal, he already knew a few languages, if it was just a language barrier someone would speak one he knew. And now we get reminded that he has this thing with him, and that it can do stuff, and maybe stuff he can use, duplicate or learn from with his Jedi powers.
Again, excellent story syck, eagerly awaiting the next round. *loved the shopkeeper btw*
Anonymousover 9 years agoI really appreciate how Jamie now has to build himself back up. Hopefully those who tried him will get their 'what for.'
Thanks syck for all your hard work.
@Master of Life: Poor Noble_Truth! He is a bit slow isn't he? :)
Master_Of_Lifeover 9 years agoMan, you're seriously churning this stuff out! Compared to Nobel_Truth and other awesome authors here, you're becoming both great and seriously prolific. The rate at which you complete this story is inspiring.
I love to see Jamie building himself back up like this, and I can't wait to see him explore other applications of his "Jedi powers" besides telekinesis and his 6th sense. -- Particularly lighting, which I expect he could accomplish by combining the concepts of lightning-bending (as Iroh explains in it in Avatar) and the Tesla coil. That would be *exactly* in Jamie's wheelhouse.
One minor gripe (from a creative writing minor):
The way that one of those fetishes just happened to be exactly what the former Jacobs family needed is a bit out of place... not all that far from deus ex machina, really.
Considering how M'bata would have virtually no use for a one-off item like that, as well as how Laura *immediately* zeroed-in on *that* fetish while the rest are irrelevant or indecipherable... it all suggests that this fetish was contrived by the author purely to solve the language problem, rather than something that truly belongs in the story.
- Of course, I understand all the elements that were involved in establishing this setup beforehand: each fetish having very specifically limited uses, other enchanted "black magic" relics (that may or may not be similarly designed for one-time use) being found in a vault, everything that went into Jamie's acquiring the fetishes from M'bata... however, it's just not quite enough to fully offset those two problems.
But like I said, the problem-solving relic is just a minor issue surrounded by impeccable work.
As always, we're all already eagerly awaiting more, so keep up all the great work, you sycko!
(I'd bet you already know how Force-Lightning would work, and even whether or not it will ever come into play in this story
but
for reference on what I meant with the lighting, look on youtube here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VXyJXtKVp-o starting at 7:20, and here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7jO5N85SNM8
at 5:30.)
