All Comments on 'A Joke Ch. 02 - Texan's Ending'

Not normally into BDSM and some of this was somewhat challenging to read but the ending was perfect!

A BEAUTIFUL story of revenge. Proof that payback truly is a bitch. 5 stars. DMW aka

Apparently, many of the ANNIES out there don't appreciate dark humor. DMW aka

Simply stunning. This is what art looks like. Completely free and over the top crazy! 5*

Shock and awe.

wow! that should be a 10/10! since I can only give you 5, that’s what I did. The next guy who tried to “ improve” on your story, really “ cucked” it up!

Best joke ever

Oh how I Love the dark aspect of this story, 10/10 dark yet not to dark well done!

Fantastic! Gave it 3 dtars because you ruined it in the epilogue. Shame. Could of been a couple of 5 star masterpieces, now it's just a 5 total couple of belly floppers.

Outstanding!!! Wish I could rate it 5* to the 10th power

Bang! Outstanding.

Best ending ever!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Delightfully OTT even though the outcome was telegraphed it was still funny.

Excellent ending but what happens next?

That was a hell of a practical joke! I am embarrassed, I didn't see it coming. I thought he would turn it on himself.

I loved the ending with the fake gun, but that's it. The rest, with the stun gun, etc., was just sickening. Roger & his wife deserved payback. Actually, after that last time with the drinks, he should've just forgot about her & filed for a divorce. Then after doing something with Roger, but not fully what he did, threaten him with bodily harm if he goes on Jim's property again. 2stars for the practical joke that wasn't. Bob

4 Stars as when my ex started disrespecting me I got a divorce and married up . Screw that revenge bullshit

I loved it. It was perfect.

This is just sickening, yes they pulled out shitty humiliation jokes on him and according to your version they did actually cheated. But to say he love's her wife and to do this just goes to show he doesn't, and poor Alice she doesn't deserve any of this at all. How the mc wife will take him back after this is just piss poor raac. Yes she humiliated him,cheated on him but she truly thought of it as a joke as delusional as it sounds. But here the mc was just plain cold and calculating.

Best follow up on "A Joke" ever!!! Dont you ever stop writing!!!!

Arsehole Rog got exactly what he deserved and needed

Just a sick mess.

I know it makes me a sick fu*k but that cracked me up. I really thought he was going to off himself then I thought he was going to do Roger and himself. BANG 🤣.

Get serious people or actually don't, it's an f-ing story it's not real.

I thought that you beat a dead horse. It was too long, there really wasn't an ending and pulling a practical joke just shows his complete lack of understanding of the situation and his own lack of maturity. Walk away. Learn the lesson. Don't make the same mistake again. Be a man. None of these things happened in your story.

Like @dinotail said. :)

Funny,

Ed

For me it was way to over the top!

There is no way wither marriage could survive.

Jim is a few sandwiches shy of a picnic.

What Jim did wasn't a joke. There's so much between the initial "sex" joke, if it was, & the BBQ joke with the lemonade to fill a page. Starting what he planned, including any "joke" in retaliation that didn't need to be done. Better to have Flo stay another week or so with her sister or somewhere else, so she'd know that he's serious. >> Leaving the BBQ, a simple "it's not happening" to Mary about her returning one final time is all that needs to be said. That, and telling her that Flo has been warned several time, including the last. See a lawyer & divorce the bitch. Flo can't love Jim all that much & want to humiliate & embarrass him, much less how many times she did it.

>> Yes, Flo wasn't alone: there was Roger. Jim could've called 911 while he's chained; that would've been plenty of repayment to him, as he'd undoubtably be arrested. Including Jim's medical bills. Flo, if she was given that last chance after the alleged sex, being named as a partner of types in Jim's being chained to the pipe, but would face the divorce, as stated.

>> Almost everything that happened in the basement was totally sickening. And ruined the story.

2 stars (was thinking of 3 or 4 initially until....) Bob