A Long Time Coming Ch. 07

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The slumber party was a first for Briana and she was beyond excited. She would spend the night with Lisa and her friends, then Jade would pick her up the next afternoon and they would go out to lunch together, just the two of them. Alex was joining Jason for a game or two of racquetball.

After lunch, they were going to visit Briana's grandmother, Adele.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Y not publish

Just curious s nit publish your work you're writing is superb I have read books on Amazon that's not as good as yours please publish it .

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

This person has also stolen Kalamazoo707 story titled "Wolves" and renamed it 'Mated to the Pack' and this story is also on this site and was posted from 2

MissPrimrose222MissPrimrose222over 9 years agoAuthor
@Writing in love

Thanks for the alert. I'm no Kaycee Carter, but the story on Amazon does seem to have the exact same premise as mine. All the details in the premise is in the first chapter of my story. The story on Amazon is not complete and is billed as the first part of the story. I'm checking into what I can do to further investigate this situation. As a result I will not be publishing other chapters here until I can get this resolved. Hopefully that won't take a long time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Writing in love

I don't want to start no mess. This is not my intent but I have respect for peoples work. I was just browsing Amazon on their Interracial BWWM section and I came cross a new book by Kaycee Carter titled "His Dark Obsession".

Just by reading the preview this is your story. this person has Columbus your work!!

If its you apologies and good luck but if its not report it to Amazon and get it taken down, but please don't penalise your loyal readers by taking it down here.

I'm loving the story so far and I just want to help you protect your work and talent.

I saw it on the UK site cause I'm in London

hotrod621hotrod621over 9 years ago
Excellent Story

I really like your writing style and the story arc. I don't mind conflict, but not between the two main characters. Seeing them in fall in love and deal with life's external challenges is more than enough conflict. I've lived through a past interracial relationship with internal family stress, and can't bring myself to read about it in something I want to enjoy.

Thank you for this story. I'm anxiously awaiting more.

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