All Comments on 'A Long Walk Home Ch. 10'

This is one of the best stories i have read keep it up

i need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thats all i can say right now

more more more!!!

I Love it . It is Perfect ! I cant wait for more !

First of all, I just wanted to say how much I enjoy all of your stories! I have read and reread all of them! I love this story the most so far (you have progressively become better and better) but I really hope something about Emily and Stephen is in it because it seems like something is happening there, but i'm not sure if you're including them in this story or not. I definitely hope they do have a story because I think they would make an interesting and sweet couple! One day I hope I can buy your books/stories (I definitely wouldn't mind, they would be the money!)

I read the whole story within a few hours. Wow. Wowwowwow. Please hurry and keep posting more! I need more! haha. It's great. :) I wish I was as good with words and plot. Gah! You're doing great and you're so talented!

That is all I am going to say

Good reading

Wow... I didn't expect him to finally break down his barriers and go for Freya... Had hoped but never actually thought he would.... Brilliant writing... am lloking forward to finishing the chapters?

I've been reading through your stories chronologically, and even though at times it felt predictable and repetitive, I was still always intrigued enough to want to go forward through your world. I have grown to care for many of your characters and it occurs every now and then that I smile to myself at a moment throughout the day remembering a scene or a line. Your writing has become stronger, so has your storytelling. (Though admittedly I did roll my eyes when Rayne became pack, and the new couples' pairing up come as no surprise...) I really hope to keep up with you in the future. All the best :)

i know i'm a little behind on everyone else's comments but i've only just found this series....and i figured that Freya was Dayton's new mate but the first thought i had when it was confirmed was 'How will she have kids?'...oh well...will just have to keep reading to find out!

Really cried when I read this...and I don't do that. Keep writing. Please.

I ALMOST cried.. not quite because there were others in the room with me and it wouldve been weird if they saw me crying out of nowhere. But great job! So sad to almost come to an end in a couple more chapters... Please make more!

That was awesome...

Is Absouloutly . . .... . . , , . . . Speechless! Thanks go s on indefinately∞ Feel like singing Lahhhhhh

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wow!!!!! Silky Silky Now!!!! I am so loving this story.

Yipeee...I still cant believe how great this story is btw none of the other follow ups from FTI to TC is a let down....EXTRAORDINARY!!!!!!!

xoxo

Aria

That dark cold lonely place... I have been reading people's comments on how they dislike Freya.

She will find happiness, and like me, the darkness will be lit up with pure love.

I'm so happy they are letting their pain go and finding each other. Love you writing! Next chapter ........ ;)

I cried for ten minuets straight after I read this.

I knew when they met that they were destined to be mated

Twice now you have managed to brig tears into my eyes. How do you make such beautiful art in words? You have a gift.

:) Your work is remarkable ... it brings me to tears more than i would like and yet i'm one of the ones up all night just to keep reading ... Love This Story Line .. def. hooked !!

!!!!!

Dont know how you do it...it's simply fabulous....thank you...nhu

They could essentially just be their own story and still be a kick ass short story!

bravo!

You get very in depth with your characters. 9 & 10 my favorites. Hope new job working out as a Selfish Me wants you writing and posting again

Maybe my 6th read? This series Rocks! Wish you will contribute more

Mistakes were made. I read this while being high and listening to Ride It by Regard and enjoyed imagining them cuddled against each other. Well done. Loved every second of it.

I'm back for the 10th time or more rereading just the last couple chapters and this 1. JazCullen, you write Amazingly deep stuff, and I just want More!