All Comments on 'A Matter of Color'

Great until the end when you truned him into a serious whimpomatic.

Really?

I liked the story. It sounded honest and straight forward. What particular words he used in conversation where his. As soon as he was in the class he was called a cracker, but he knew different people said different things. The idea that he would not take her back leads to some questions, but he had those questions, not me. People are the way they are, deal with it.

I gave it a 5 to counteract the negativity, and racists.

It is still there afterwards

You wasted time money and brain cells

Cowards die many times but brave only once

You just had to use the alcohol cliche as the centre of your story.

Pretty straight up stuff. You are a good writer.

Good story, not a favorite, but good.

I would have liked to see more remorse on the part of Diane. But overall was great!

At least he dumped her slutty as.

Yes, she was a slut. Yes, we all knew it was coming.

But, he was just way to accepting or possibly naive.

A bit too unbelievable

Vaginas are elastic, they don't get "all stretched out," if they did every woman that delivered a baby would have a stretched out vagina.

The average black cock is only marginally larger than the average white cock.

Why delay the divorce and for what possible reason?

Sign the papers and just move on.

And, by the way, this black/ white thing is way overdone.

3/5

The only very large sample, peer reviewed study of penis size published in a respected medical journal found that the normal distribution of cock size does NOT vary between blacks and whites, nor does it vary according to height.

Enough of this B.S. about the size of the penis. It is an absolute and undeniable fact that the black penis is, on average, no larger than the average white penis. Of course there are exceptions. But, these exceptions apply equally to both black and white equipment. Since the average female passage is approximately 8 inches long, give or take a bit. What use is a penis that is over that length. Fact is, men that are overly endowed find they can't do anything with the excess. It makes for some interesting story telling but, huge, much larger than average penises are more of a drawback than otherwise. I know these stories are not true, at least in the most part, but, authors, please use a little common sense.

I normally like your stories, but this should have gone in the trash. I expect this kind of crap from JPB, not you.

Not signing the divorce papers was a big screw up!

He knew that work was going to foot the education bill & he would soon be promoted to a higher paying job.

Wait until then to divorcee & she’ll get much more alimony.

Add stupid to cuckhold

He always have the guy act ridiculous, and then chase the girl eating that humble pie. It's very repetitive.

Like he's hitting the same character beats in every story.

Maybe that's why he stopped writing, he realised his inability to write anything new, not to mention proofread properly.

What an idiot! He should have signed the divorce paper right away. Was he thinking about getting back with Di because he really was a cuckold?

Interesting story with a bit of a twist. Glad to see the races described without so much of the usual stereotype.

His wife randomly drops into the story. I was wondering who the fuck Diane was, I thought the guy was a single student.

pretty racist story. get help dude.

Was just OK until he went to the 'dark side' with the colored girl. Gave it a -1 ( there is no way to vote less than 1), so no vote here for me.

Well if there ever was a story that should have a main character with more balls then this is it. When he went back to help toutor the guys one last time after they kept him in the dark about his wife stepping out on him, he lost any semblance of a man and became a clear pussy. Doesn't matter the color of your skin, if you keep quite about a slut whoring around on her husband you are a piece of shit deserving of your own wife stepping out on you...

1 Star for this piece of shit.

839 / 5000

Resultados de traducción

First of all, who says that blacks are better endowed than whites, check the average of black and white and it is 6 inches, you are impressed by the lies that black people tell, that white people love them, hahaha I'm a black woman and I have many white friends and most of them would not date a black man unless he is rich or with an important career, all the stories you hear of black men with huge penises and who dominate many white women, are of fantastic blacks who know not They will have white women unless they are raped, and I had relationships with many blacks and none of them got even 8 inches, so where are the huge blacks, pure fantasies because blacks are ugly no matter how much they boast of gallants, most will end up with a black girl or very lucky with a mulatto like me

With Friends like he has .. He doesn't need any enemies . That Keith is a Great friend

From all the criticism I guess no one read the preface and the disclaimer. Our author says its a true story. I believe him. There is a lot of stereo typing go on every where. I'm and old white man raised in mix communities in San Francisco and I'm not prejudiced. Hell I lived in public housing as a kid and I had black friends that lived in houses. I saw more prejudice by blacks against whites. People are people. There are dumb shit whites and there dumb shit blacks. Keep writing, please

I loved the story and gave it 5 stars. This stereotype that black men are more endowed than white men is not true. I grew up in a 70% black community and most of my friends were black guys. My first was the fact that Diane did neo even think she fucked Rick until she came home from the party and took the shower. That is when she saw the hickies and bite marks from Rick. Then he showed up on Tuesday and told her that if she did not sleep with him again that night, he would tell Jim. That is where Diane needed to say, go ahead and tell Jim. But then she told Jim that Rick go his entire cock into her and she did not think it was possible and they fucked for three hours. This is not something she did because she was afraid Rick was going to tell Jim. Then they fucked for every Tuesday and Thursday until after the night that Jim caught them when he came home early. Here is the important part to me.....they never fucked again after that time. Why? If Rick was suck a superior lover that Jim and had a larger cock that Jim, why did Diane not fuck Rick any more after she got caught by Jim? If she was so in to Rick then why did she not fuck him any more after getting caught? She realized what she was losing and it was much more than she was getting from Rick. If Rick was such a fantastic lover, why did Diane not just keep fucking him because she was so addicted to that large cock that he had? She was losing something she had with Jim that was much more valuable than getting fucked by Rick and his large cock.

Diane no longer wanted to fuck Jim because he would know she was with another man with a much larger cock that he had. That is why she stopped having sex with him. She thought her pussy would go back to it's original size but it did not (at least in this story). She was asking Jim to take her back because she made a mistake with Rick and his large cock and she wanted what she had with Rick. However, it was too late. Rick had destroyed her marriage with Jim. Jim no longer wanted her back. That is how the story ended. Jim has moved on to another woman and Diane is left alone, not even visiting Rick in the hospital after he got beat up. She is alone. Jim has moved on. Their marriage is over.

a bit racist but i guess the whole black big dick thing is never mind the idea that its extra humiliation but interesting story

@Anonymous Re: "Contra Brooks" - You're splitting hairs. You say there's NO difference, I said there's a marginal difference, i.e. there isn't the BIG difference that fiction would claim. We're essentially saying the same thing.

Through their writing most authors here reveal they must be very old, cucks, completely out of touch with the facts, or some combination of the three. There's a lot to dislike in this story, but I'll limit myself to two points.

1. One has to be entirely oblivious to reality to write this: "How many white's [sic] can say they know what discrimination really feels like, I can." Well, let's see...just about any White. Since the 1970s massive institutional discrimination has been aimed at Whites, especially White males, beginning with university admissions and private and government employment, and now it's edging into health care and the judicial system. Mediocre to incompetent blacks for decades have consistently gotten preference over smarter, more skilled, and more conscientious Whites. Curricula have been dumbed down to try to conceal black incapacity to the point that university departments outside of STEM represent negative value added educationally, and the woketard left is moving fast in STEM to make sure that more unqualified women and unqualified "minorities" are shoved into the programs and standards are lowered so they can graduate.

2. The author perpetuates the myth of the "BBC" in the crudest sort of way. There is a very large (sample size 15k), peer reviewed study of penis size (British Journal of Urology). It found that the distribution of penis size (length and girth) does NOT differ between blacks and Whites, nor does it vary according to height. In case you are wondering, the mean length is 5.17". A variance of just 4/5" more or less puts someone at either the 90th or 10th percentiles, respectively. The MC at 7" would be around the 98th percentile. Penises much larger than that hardly exist, except in the minds of LW authors, who must be afraid they have teeny wienies or closeted homosexuals (penis size is a major fetish for them, but not for women). As for a much larger than average penis stretching a vagina out and leaving it "loose", do authors here have sex? If they did they'd realize that penis do open and stretch vaginas, but when the penis is withdrawn the vagina goes back to normal. It's similar to if you hook your index fingers in the corners of you mouth and pull your cheeks apart. When you release your cheeks, they go back to normal.

As for the very rare penises that are substantially larger than average, women generally find them uncomfortable to painful. Evolution has built women for "average". The fact that the clit is in front on the outside and the G-spot is 2-3" inside means that even a guy with a micropenis, if he stays hard and knows what he's doing can give a woman as many orgasms as she's capable of .

While I'm at this, writers here often write that because someone has a really big cock he is able to hit a woman's cervix, and some even write that the "big cock" can penetrate the cervix and squirt sperm directly into the womb. Authors, here's a clue: if you actually know where the cervix is, you can reach it with your fingers. As a warning, however, I should point out that most women find it extremely painful to have a penis hitting their cervixes ( they say it's like getting punched in the stomach). Writing that a penis penetrates a cervix is just idiotic. It can never happen, and if it somehow did, the woman would be severely injured.

A lot of myth.

He trash

Enjoyed the story.

Thanks for writing.

Ah the myth of the massive black cock and the tripe of the permanent stretched vagina. Whatever. Grow up. Research things a bit before writing. Pornstars like Shaun Livingstone have had surgery and are still 9.5 to 10 inches.

Stop commenting about your small penis. I'm hung like a lightswitch. You hear me ranting about bbc?

4/5

Nato_

Great story, I loved it.

DIANE GOT JUST WHAT SHE DESERVED IGIVE IT A 5 STAR

This is racist and reflects poorly on the author. The fact the MC begins dating a physically abusive black woman as the story concludes just adds to the distasteful racial bias and negativity that permeates the plot. Slirpuff revealed an unpleasant face to readers through this submission.

So he goes from a cheater to an abuser. Oh, well.

Uggh. Lot of racist elements packed in here. Difficult read. The white savior stuff was hard to take. Not to mention what Diane did. If she really was so out ofnit drunk that she didn’t remember until next morning in the shower, then coming clean when Rick approached with blackmail attempt woukd have been relatively easy to forgive. Instead she became obsessed with her rapist because he is black and hung. Riiiight. That doesn't happen unless Diane is mentally diseased. So instead dehe spends the.next few weeks twice a week trying to cram a huge black cock inside hee vagina. That must have been painful. I doubt Rick was a sensitive or skilled lover. And yes again the trope of thr massively hung black guys. Check out a penis size calculator on thr Internet. Even 9 inches is a big deal and rare. The tropes of the 11 inch or 12 inch cocks are silly as the frequency in our universe is 1 in millions. Buy of course Diane is surrounded by horse sized cocks on the predominantly black university. Whatever. Author has done better.

Why is it perfectly ok to this writer to have the girl give the guy who turned her down for a date a hard slap? This story isn't only racist, it is also sexist.

In Femdom agitprop, the only part I actually enjoy is where the wife tells the cuck what has really been happening.

One misconception is that a big cock stretches a vagina for life. If that were true, a woman would never feel any size penis after delivering an eight pound baby. Now, that definitely stretches a vagina. I agree that this story is very racists. I'm white, and if I said I know what discrimination or racism is because I'm at an all-black college...then I'm a fool. Whites are privileged, but many are too ignorant to make something of themselves. They're threatened by a penis...that's a weak man who's married to a dumb slut. There is so much more to a relationship than fucking. The morals of this country are headed to the toilet. Quit stereotyping blacks as predators of white women. Some are...but most are decent, hard-working, honest assets to our society. Don't judge blacks by their penis, the Hollywood cop shows, or the evening news.

I assume most of those calling racism have never been exposed to the lower/middle class black lifestyle. Pity.

And for you wimps out there, a well deserved slap across the face isn’t abuse. Grow a set of man berries already. It’s a work of fiction. It is racist to suggest a writer cannot talk about his perceptions of a group of people. They’re big boys and girls. They can take it. Should I be upset if a black author writes about rich white folk going to parties, dropping acid and banging each other’s wives? I might laugh at the concept but I wouldn’t hide behind racism in a lame attempt to denigrate the author.

didn't like the rationalization of drunk/drugged and blackmail for that story. mixed with her being hostile toward him... it doesn't make her pleading for him to take her back feel genuine.

Hard to believe this guy thinks he’s a writer.

Made no sense.

Long story with an unbelievably stupid lead female and an ending so abrupt that it is an after thought.