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Click hereI turned Lauryn on my lap so she was no longer facing me. I pulled her into my arms and she snuggled into my side on that big comfy chair on the balcony. She once again placed her face into my neck as I grabbed my glass of wine. I peered over the balcony and I looked out in the large wooded area behind my home. It was such a peaceful moment that I felt I could live it for the rest of my life and that's exactly what I intended on doing. At that moment I knew what I had to do.
"Marry me." I whispered to her...
- COMMENTS
Anonymous4 months agoAfter finishing up the tragic and heartbreaking story 'Valerie' in my back catalog this one was a fantastic respite. Thank you for that.
Anonymous4 months agoFrankie is a unique character: an author fantasy Mary Sue who is nevertheless entirely unpleasant, without redeeming qualities. Shallow, jumps to conclusions CONSTANTLY--her only personality traits are being rich, not listening to people she claims to care about, and liking it when bimbo with even less personality fawns all over her. Selfish and controlling.
At least Lauren is rich, too, or the power dynamics would be even more abusive.
AlyssaTennya12 months agoDid not care for main character, too selfish. Too rich. Am a fan of rich vs poor relationship dynamics or rich vs middle class but rich vs ungodly rich just leaves me pissed off at the more obnoxious one.
UncertainTover 1 year agoI loved reading this again. Have you just reposted this as I am sure that I voted 5* last time and there must have been earlier comments?
Anonymousover 1 year agoVery well orchestrated storey but the over arrogance of the principal character overshadowed the feel of the plot. Still interesting though
Anonymousabout 2 years agoIts good to read a story with realistic characters with their hurts, weaknesses and faults all on display. I like the way they face life's hurdles and overcome them rather than just being two 2 dimensional cardboard cut outs of some flawless super hero, as is too common in many stories on this site.
It is a loss to this site and its readers that you only wrote 2 excellent stories before stopping.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoFrankie was very controlling, even in very small ways (like being pissed that lauryn wasn’t in the bed the next morning - like chill). But their first time together was well written. Just wish I could like Frankie more.
Ravey19almost 3 years agoSorry you haven't written any more than the 2 stories listed here. This was a well written one with 2 fleshed out characters and a creditable storyline. The ending was good but a little abrupt although was expecting it to involve her mother more. Perfect reason for another chapter. 5 from me.
