by stewartlinda
I have read this many times and each time it gets better. Excellent writing. I hope you continue!!!!
YEEESSSSS!VERY VERY VERY EXCITING STORY!!!My cock got so hard since the brother's cock was against his sister's ass when they made each steps.I had a boner till the end of this story and believe me,this is one among the five best exciting stories which kept my big cock very hard till the end of all the chapters.No need to tell you,that I had to make my cock happy by jerking it and then it sent 5/6 jets of cu in the air,falling down in my belly.10 on 10 for this story.However I cant wait for a 3rd chapter in which Donna and his gorgeous sister in law having a threesome with the guy!
I just love reading and rereading this, and it doesn't fail to get me off every single time.
brings back memories of fucking with my sister - she is hot and would love to fuck her right now... my cock is so hard at the thought
Loved this story. Brother sister stories are my 2nd favorite, mom-son are first. I was hoping that after they got out of the costume, both would hit the shower and then resume properly on the bed. Great anyway, we need a sequel.
This was very good. The premise was intensely erotic, and your writing style only added to that intensity, rather than detracted from it (as happens on a lot of other erotic stories out there)... I enjoyed this a lot.
Thank you!
obviously a rhetorical question lol
they'll fuck like rabbits and she'll get knocked up
sounds yummy to me
This by far the best spontaneous incest story in this place. Excellent job.
OMG...is there ANY doubt you would?....I WOULD!...More stories please!....Love the "accidental" fuck or suck fantasies.
Great story very erotic. I wanna go to the next party.
I didn't want it end. MMMMMMMMMMMMMM Hugs & kisses
As said before good use of language.
You've got telling a story down, we'd like to see more.
keep this up. you really got it you know... would really love to see part 2.
The story was great, and your masterful use of language made it even better!
even if the plot of the costume for 2 people has already been used.... it was nice and fun to read.
Keep on !
And thanks for your work
I've never commented on a story before but felt I just had to encourage you to write more. If this is truly your first published erotic lit then you are off to a fantastic start. Please keep writing!
The creative details that flowed along with the slowly building heat and electric excitement of eroticism left me extremely satisfied with the story's climax. The final paragraph left me happy. You left me wishing I'd grown up with sister such the one in your story. If I was a smoker, I'd have a cigarette now. Thank you.
Nicely done author. Now on to part two, okay? Pretty please. ML
Well written, and very hot. I look forward to more of your work. =)
I like it especially the part of under the costume was a smell of pussy. I always like sniffing dirty panties and how a pussy smells. Wish you could include in your story about incest panty sniffing.
Seriously my favorite tale on here right now! Looking forward to the next costume party!
Loved it, let's hear about the 2nd. costume party! Maybe his wife needs to be the back half of the costume for a little while?
HOT HOT HOT!!!!! I have had sex with siblings before but nothing as hot as this!!!!!
Wow, this story was totally hot.
You lied. You said you couldn't write (lol).
Good job.
I loved it! It was nice to read something different!
So kudos to you on some interesting originality.
I look forward to more original story lines from you!
Thanks for writing!
sexmate
Fantastic Story! I sincerely hope there is more, a whole new party to go to! Seriously, one of the best stories I've read on here in a long time!
I love stories like this, where odd things happen to create sexual adventure, nice set up.
So many stories have no forethought and seem to blend. This is unique and stands out. Awesome....write more!!
now i have a sore arm and need a change of shorts! thanks alot..... no really, thanks and great job.
What a great read. It was a well constructed plot with a great climax. I hope that you continue with the second party and beyond. Well done
Of course he's gonna go to the costume party! I loved this story and look forward to reading the next one. I noticed they didn't use a condom... accidents happen! ;)
Very good story and well written. Thanks for the good read.
That was just a fine little incest tale. It would be nice to see them continue their incestuous couplings, accidentally or otherwise. Thanks for great submission!.
It was a very erotic story, it was well bilt to the climax. it also had a good ëxcuse" for the sex part. most stories are to easy turning in to sex, there should be some resistance.
Of course he will go to his sisters party ; are we going to hear all about it ? maybe he wants to taste her !!!
I liked the story and I think it was a believable accident that lead them to having sex as for the comment about monster tits I don't think 36D's are monsters.
This was a great story. As for the comment about not liking cheating stories, get over your moral self and realize that you are on an erotic story site. Does your wife know that you are on here reading stories?
I thought i would just read a part of it. Could'nt stop myself from reading the whole thing. This was top stuff...keep it up for us!!!
Hot and erotic! If this is your first story, you could have fooled me. Well written and original. Looking forward to read some more. Don't make us wait. Thanks. ML
Your story was so erotic it made me hard reading it and I am in my 50's