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Jonah turned to him. In the dimmest light from the edges of the window, his face still had that strange healthy look, but the color in his cheeks seemed waxy and false, like someone had painted the health on his face. His eyes were hectic and bright.
"Promise me you wont try to hunt Mark down."
Thad was very quiet. "It was Mark? Your leader's younger brother? Why the fuck are you trying to protect him."
Jonah flinched from the anger in his lover's voice. "Because. That's the reason I left. I couldn't tell anyone, because if they f-found out about him, then something would happen. I'm n-not sure what, b-but someone will get hurt. Promise me Thad."
Thad went stiff. His anger was building up inside him. Couldn't Jonah see? Why couldn't he see why this animal needed to die?
"Ow! Thad stop it!" The panicky note in Jonah's slurred voice snapped Thad out of his rage, and he realized that he was holding Jonah too tight, his forearm was digging into Jonah's frail chest, cutting off his air.
Jonah went limp and cried helplessly. "P-Promise me!" He whispered. "Promise, or I wont go! You c-can carry me, b-but I'll scream, and m-m-make the c-crazies hear us."
Thad rubbed the bridge of his nose. His rage was gone, gone at the shock of hurting Jonah. Now he just felt helpless and scared. "I promise Jonah. I swear, I wont hurt Mark. But if he tries to d-do anything to you--I'll... I'll kill him."
Thad was choking, trying to keep the angry sob from his throat. Jonah went limp in his arms, huddling into his body. He fell asleep with the tears drying on his face.
Tomorrow was going to be a big day.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoHonestly I love the level of violence your characters go through. I find it to be a huge turn on! Rock on soul sister...or brother. Whichever.
SanguineAffairabout 11 years agoI haven't read much of your work at all- in fact I only started reading this story because I liked the demon one you just put out. I like your writing style quite a bit, but the rape was unexpected. That's a trigger for -a lot- of people, you should consider putting a warning at the beginning of your story when it involves something like that, so people know. I didn't really like that, but I got past it because it fits the story, and you didn't dwell on it and go into graphic detail- and thank you for that. I'm enjoying the story so far, and I am a little anxious about what's to come, but hopefully it won't be too bad for poor Jonah.
Anonymousover 11 years agoWould it be possible for you to write a story where the hero DOESN'T get raped? You write so well, but the level of violence spoils it. Sorry, but there's something sick about the level of pain you put you characters through. I keep hoping you'll keep the writing style but lose the sadism - it isn't happening.
Anonymousover 12 years agoThank you for not portraying Thad as a stereotype, like most media love to protray black men. The simple minded garbage of the world would have painted him more like Mark, with his pants hanging off his butt, gold tooth/chains, hat backward, and talking ghetto bullshit. Thanks for having guts to show the truth, and being a good writer.
