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Thanks a lot for your nice comments, I'll try to post the next chapter soon.
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Anonymousover 4 years agoA very enjoyable story but the ending is rather abrupt. How about revising the chapter to extend the story. What happened to Mark and Heather? Did they all stay friends?
Anonymousover 4 years agoso first of all, that scene where the guy falls on top of the girl and ends up facing her, I was just thinking “oh WOW where have I seen ｔｈａｔbefore??” that scene is basically the basis of all anime. It’s the anime law to have the guy fall on top of the girl, and you CANNOT prove me otherwise! Also, that whole thing with Angela being telepathically connected to Chris when she’s only a PURE BABY is just screaming anime. Like all weird and supernatural? That’s kinda cool. Having that be in a story that’s not even supernatural but like also BLENDED into the whole thing— like, unpopular onion, but ᵗʰᵉ ˢᵗᵒʳʸ ⁱˢ ᵏⁱⁿᵈᵃ ʳᵉᵃˡˡʸ ᵃʷᵉˢᵒᵐᵉ ᵍᵒᵒᵈ ᵃⁿᵈ ᴵ ˡⁱᵏᵉ ⁱᵗ ᵃ ˡᵒᵗ ᴵ ᴰᴼᴺᵀ ᔆᴱᴱ ᵂᴴʸ ᔆᴼ ᴹᴬᴺʸ ᴹᴼᴿᴱ ᴾᴱᴼᴾᴸᴱ ᴰᴼᴺᵀ ᴳᴼ ᴼᴺ ᴴᴱᴿᴱ ᔆᴼ yeah
catman71over 14 years agowhere you go from here i do not know, but please do because i have fallen in love with all of these characters and would like to know what happens with mark heather nina and the bunch
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoI'm not sure what more you could add to the story but you have done an amazing job so far.
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoI enjoyed it very much, not sure what another chapter would be about but I will read it. Thanks!
