- BDSM
- Anything, She Said
- Page 2
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Click hereShe smiled in his eyes as he collapsed beside her, her arm moving round his neck, her face wreathed in the post-orgasmic smile he so loved.
- I'm so glad you did that to me. Feeling better now my darling? she murmured, and kissed his mouth.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 6 years agoThis was magnificently written! One of the most honest looks at the D/s conflict many people find themselves facing that I have ever read! You have a true talent ~ please keep writing :)
Anonymousabout 8 years agoMidway through, there's an unsettled and uncomfortable feeling which lurks in my gut upon reading this. However, it is very stimulating and there is a nervous and exciting thrill I get, as a reader which carries me through to the end. :) There is a fuzzy warmth which endears the situation to me, too.
Erotica that provokes thoughts (other than plain filthy ones) and emotions is a rare find. My interest is keenly perked. I'll keep an eye on your account for more stories. :) Well Wishes, from Lady K.
Rawmaster50over 13 years agoThis journey into the mind of the Dom here was excellent. I have walked along this path some and I remember my thoughts during that journey. You have captured the moment and the sweet/sinister nature of the ride. 5 stars
nomoretears00over 13 years agoAnd yes, it made me unconfortable to some degree...but I do like how you explored this aspect of their lifestyle. Pain and pleasure runs so closely together. But being able to push a reader out of their comfort zone, yet able to keep them active in the story shows a true skill.
Scorpio44almost 14 years agoI have not encountered a woman who needed such harshness very often, but when she did NEED it, I gave it to her. The internal struggle described was unfamiliar to me, but understandable. The more I read and encounter in life the more I believe BDSM is a much bigger field than most people believe.
Thank you.
kaiyandomalmost 14 years agoConveys a Doms internal struggle quite well. I will admit, I am hooked. Taking notes :)
Scotsman69about 14 years agoAuthorYou read on because it is a fairly well-writen story. ( He says modestly...) And because it attempts to explore honestly, uncomfortable aspects of BDSM which most writing doesn't.
That is precisely why I wrote it. I want to confront the uncomfortable, which most others avoid.
I'm not in the business of being a popular writer. I try to be an honest writer.
slutLabout 14 years agoYou captured all the confliction in a D/s relationship but this isn't a Dom i would like to have. I was like i wanted to stop reading but couldn't. Possibly a tad disturbing... Why did i want to read on?
