All Comments on 'Bachelor Party Surprise'

As Tony the Tiger would say GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I think this is one of the best stories on the site. I'd love to see you doing more wife-sharing stories. Maybe with a bit more naughty dialogue from the wife?

This IS the best story I've ever read here.

you could do this again and have her in a dp

Stupid wimpy ass American husband who loves being cuckolded... why don't you do that to your mother n sister as well. Ah, you did it already!

1*

Love the comments! Come on guys this is LITEROTICA expect the story to be beyond the realms of norm! So she got fucked by plenty! ! This is erotica fiction at it's best (bet you had your hand on your tool) TOP MARKS TO THE AUTHOR! 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE Greg! Love you all! BYE

Married? Not anymore. Just a pimp and his money making bitch. Wonder if the reality of their dead marriage will occur before the first STD in contracted. Hey, you do what you gotta do to make a buck, right?

Wrong.

I totally enjoyed this and having been to a few parties can see how this could happen! Husband and wife will reap many benefits from this arrangement along with a relationship void of any jealousy!

Wished it was mine and my wife's story!! JimCD

He could get her to lay on table on her back knees bent legs apart, her sweet love hole filled with alcohol flavored cream. The boys then take strawberries and dip in her pussie and eat them licking their fingers clean! That's finger licking good (oh try it out she will love it) Love you all! GREG. OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.

"And you never will again!"

Awesome. Look forward to reading more of your stories.

Loved the story, thanks!

Loved it. Well presented. Loved the interaction between husband and wife.

deserve each other. I predict violence and STD's in their future.

yeah tons of stds for the both of them, at least use condoms geez story or no story.

A wife that is willing to do whatever to help their business is special and what a lucky husband to watch and join in on the fun. I would have helped her by sucking the guys cocks to keep them cleaned off and hard for her. What a lucky cocksucker!!!o

Enjoy it as an erotic story for entertainment and sexual fantasy, not as a discourse on social behavior, religious tenets, or your own psychological issues.

Unpleasant story poorly told. Not worth the time it took to read.

You did a great job writing this in such a way as to tap into the fear of our wife's ENJOYING anyone other than ourselves! And yet let us off the hook with viewing it through the husband eyes, who was enjoying it as much as she was. The fact that they both agree to continue this course but always put each other first was a great way to end it. It doesn't need another chapter but if there was one I wouldn't be mad at you!

1* for this crap.

In fact the author is more interested in describing the big cock, the big load, sloppy seconds, lick cum out of wife's STD cunt. So it gives the perception the author wants to suck a cock than pussy....so it seems the author is a gay pretending he's a husband!.....this is so pathetic.....and the writer is quite afraid as he doesn't allow to score his stories!....this is so wimp!.....what kind of cower man is this author?

Perhaps the author may have better chance to publish his stories in the T&C and/or Gay session. LW readers don't appreciate wimp, cuckold / gay with that kind of pathetic stories.

1* for this lame and garbage.

One of the better stories on this topic here on LIT, never mind the BS anonymous wimps. They couldn’t get it up if they tried anyway.....

.... your goal is to marry a cheating three hole cum dump WHORE who as the morals of a snake and is as trustworthy as Vegas Hooker. Bet she even has the keys to your bedroom closet!

Good story, I liked the ending. Whilst blokes with small ego's get outraged about being cucked, they are too dim to see that's not what this story is about. Spontaneous passion, of necessity. Getting carried away in the moment. Not sure about "birth of a stripper", but it's possible... once bitten, twice shy or hooked?? You were clear which direction this fictional couple went - power to the imagination and tough to the guys who don't like it - they probably love abusing women

Getting Fucked and Filled by a bunch of unknowns is how you end up with the Pussy Rot. She will get it for sure, probably sooner than later. It takes a special kind of wimpy Cuck to be and stay married to a nasty whore like that. You know she will run into one of those guys eventually and will end up banging him without and behind her husband's back.

I have NEVER seen a relationship end well once the taste for other "meat" happens to a wife or girlfriend. It's like once a dog tastes blood, they are done for and you need to rid yourself of them.

Wife and I loved it.

Three weeks later she got morning sickness and found out she was pregnant.

Over the next four years she had three more kids whose unknown fathers were members of various Bachelor parties, one kid even came out black. After the first pregnancy she insisted her husband have a vasectomy to make sure the future kids would not be his. She said she wanted an even half dozen, so two more to go. They wanted a big family

Just use a condom ffs. Or the pill or a diaphragm.

A very nice story . I loved it but took as just that.. A story. Some of the comments are unbelievable. How they don't get it that it's erotic fiction !!!!

Great job

Great Story. My wife got so aroused that I had to fuck her the all night she read it

yep, you are. Since when does it matter what others have to say. Feeling guilty about something? 1*

Please more, and more descriptions of her. 36d ass like Jayden James, etc...

I first read this years ago- I don't recall just when. It may have been shortly after you posted it. I didn't make a point of leaving comments then. I just read, enjoyed and moved on. But over the years I kept returning to it. The first few times I had to search

for it, not remembering your author name or even the title, so I noted and saved both where I wouldn't lose them.

As erotic fiction goes, this is right in my overheated wheelhouse. So much so that it has influenced my further reading choices and I've made it a standard of excellence in measuring the quality of purpose written erotic fantasy. It's as reliable a turn on for me as it was the first time even after having reread again and again. As niche writing in a particular genré, "Bachelor Party Surprise" is the gold standard in my estimation.

There are so many ways of characterizing it- short, sweet and to the point, down and dirty effective, hotter than a twenty dollar pistol and so on. I've enjoyed reading all your stories. I do appreciate different approaches to erotica, some of them subtle and nuanced and others more like a blunt instrument. This will remain my favorite. My very own personal erection meter will brook no argument. My dick rates this alongside titanium on the Mohs scale of hardness.

How I love wives taking control of the situation. She was in control from the time she had the first taste. Make that money honey!

This is a new favorite story for me. I love that it's a husband and wife, that they work together, and that the fucking is not just the wife with other men, it's the wife with other men AND her husband and she love fucking him the most. ;) Great read!

My wife never striped at a bachelor but right after we were married we went to a strip club with two other couples and my wife was the only person in our group under 21. Denver had a law you had to be 21 to watch strippers but only 18 to strip. The club told her they would let her sit with us if she stripped. She was a little drunk and her girlfriends talked her into it. We all enjoyed seeing my wife naked on stage. She never thought stripping naked for a crowd would excite her like it did. She’s done it a few time since.

I think this story is one of my all time favorites. At Military Birthday Balls there are always some young guys that bring paid escorts as their dates. Sometimes you can tell who they are and sometimes you guess wrong. At one Ball I was invited up to a hotel room after party with some others. The woman, I assumed was a stripper, ended up taking us all on. It wasn't until a few months later I found out she wasn't a stripper but his young looking wife. They did that four more times that I know of.

This story is definitely one of my all time favorites. Loved how the wife stepped in to fill the gap and her husband had a front row seat of his wife's carnal actions. Love stories where the wife releases her inner slut and this was one of the best.

I wonder if you can help.

Their is a similar story to this where the stripper fails to turn up the wife ends up getting gangbanged and another stripper shows up at near the end and the wife and stripper take on everyone one more time, even the hubby fucks the stripper. The end of the story ends with the politician going to heir shop and personally thanking them.

It to was a solid 5 ***** col_lover@hotmail.com if you can help. Cheers

Pure porn! I loved it. I read this story years ago and gave it a 4. I don’t know why. If I could change it I would give it a 5 Star Rating. Damn Literotica! This story and the author are now in my favorites.

She has a husband that doesn't love her. 1 star

No marriage in the true sense with this couple. No way would I be happy or allow my wife to be fucked or felt up.

Inspirational

My husband use to put on party's for his workers. My part was to help him with drinks and get the food ready. I stayed in the back ground most of the time. As the company grew he had to hire more people to help me. I started hanging out with the men more and more. My husband love me being out there with him but, when the men would drink to much they always try to feel my boobs and ass. I did not like it at first but, my husband said that it was ok because, they were drunk and did not know what they were doing. This went on more and more my boobs were out more then inside my blouse. Most of the men would try and suck them or bite them. It was fun but, got care away to many times.

Will

this is one of my all time favorites, great setup, great sex, great ending, plus husband gets to participate and doesn't end up humiliated or sucking cum out of her like a wimp ass cuckold!

Do you think that you could get all those guys together and gangbang my wife?

Aki egyszer beleesik a gödörbe ,ott is marad ,ebből már nem lesz jó házasság,nem lesz klasszikus család és előbb utóbb beérik a válás!Ez egy undorító írás!

Later they discovered she was pregnant and had a very nasty bunch of STDs that damaged the baby, sterilized her and rotted his dick off.

I have to laugh at people who express manufactured outrage and moralize about a story when they are on a website for adult-erotica. What are they expecting when they CHOOSE to come here and read sexual fantasy stories? No one is telling anyone to go out and do it. It's so hypocritical... and the fantasy was fun and hot! (Which is why the latest critic probably finished reading, came and ONLY THEN left a scathing comment. Too funny lol.

Well the tables should be turned , he should get some viagra , a cock pump and a bachelorette party with at least 8 women , all good looking , and have his wife bartender while he strips and fucks and sucks all eight of them ! Just make sure none of them are gay or bi , so she don’t steal the show munching carpet !

That's what drinking on the job will do you,😄. Very Erotic story, thank you. Also for the one who posted his Gay comment and number, are you really that stupid? These posts are regarding the story, not YOU!! Take yourself to the chat room!!

My wife actually stripped for a couple of bachelor parties a few years ago. One was for a coworker and she actually ended up fucking him that night. The other was for a friend of a friend and she sucked the groom's dick but she also fucked our friend who set up the party. Thankfully the friend had video'd the party and I got to watch it all after the fact.

Loved how the story developed. The husband was in a bind and needed his wife's help to keep afloat. She had gone shopping, but I think she already knew what would be required. The party began and the guys started to get frisky. Since she was the only entertainer their thoughts and hands soon turned to her. The party really got going when she began giving the groom a simulated blowjob. One of the guests quickly got behind her and started pumping away. The simulated blowjob turned real and the party was on. The wife always tried to gauge her husband's reaction. Since he was jerking off she figured everything was a go. From that point on the party was on. One guest after another pumped a load into her. I especially loved the description of the big guy who really fucked her good. She gives her husband a superb blowjob and swallows his load and takes on a few more customers. Finally, she is exhausted and asks him to rescue her from a possible long round of seconds. The party is a big success and I think Kristy may have discovered a new line of work. She appeared to enjoy herself and her husband enjoyed watching her in action. This could lead to future endeavors for her as the business continued to grow.

I think I would enjoy being fucked one after another by friends or neighbors or coworkers while my husband watches...either willingly or forced to watch.

Hi my first wife liked to strip at local strip bar with me watching made me so horny watching her on stage. Also knowing my friends where with me after bowling night.. She would pick one of my friends and we would bring him home with us a have a 3-some so hot watching her fuck another guy.

I've always love watching my gorgeous, sexy wife fuck other guys.

Wow lovely story, you should have let your wife have fun alone with that 1 guy that came in and both of you should have fucked her together, wife's will never be satisfied with 1 dick, they might say it's ok but it's not, so get urls wife fucking other guys and keep her happy, atleast your wife is going to be a slut for other upcoming parties. She is really going to enjoy sex. Happy future gangbangs, remember your wife needs more dick

Watching my wife get her pussy licked to completion, and then moan and cum again on a nice big cock is the BEST!

One of the best stories!

Good story. Author should ignore the negative comments from readers who can't accept that this is fiction. That said, I'm waiting for someone to write a story about a woman as the stripper at her own fiance's bachelor party. In other words, she is the bride.

Best story I have read in a while

Nonsense. The guy pimping his wife for gangbangs would most likely be arrested and charged together with his wife for prostitution. Bachelor parties do often go sideways but gangbangs are not going to happen without STD tests, disclaimers, and a extra pay for stripers that would be willing to do that. You think some dancer would go for a risk of catching STD or getting arrested for a regular pay? Frustrated housewife could but not as a regular unless again ... you want to get your business busted and get yourself arrested.

Cuck pimps his whore out to be gangbanged at a batchelor party. What a fool.

the bride to be being a stripper at her fiance's party is accidental gangbang.

An interesting, enjoyable story, what a pity that so many reviewers forget that these stories are works of fiction.

I enjoyed this story.

Why are there so many self hating cucks out there that feel the need to thrash a story after shooting their load to it?

Another lame gangbang story. Very lame.

One of the best stories here.

Enjoyable reading

Oh to be the guy that came first

Hot story. You guys saying it’s lame have obviously been beating your little wiener in mommies basement for so long you wouldn’t know a good story if it bitch slapped you like your mommy does for wearing her dirty panties. And if the guy likes watching his wife get fucked, that’s their business. You’re just jealous because all you get to watch is the train being run on your mom every weekend through the keyhole in her bedroom door. Get a fucking life ya 50 year old virgin.

I, for one lament the non-use of punctuations. It seems almost all the authors in Literotica, have aversions to the use of punctuation usage. It makes for an easier to read story, when punctuations are used.

He is now a pump and she is a prostitute.

I don't know why any would do this to his wife unless he hates her.

A pimp and prostitute. Arrested, jailed, lose business.

She is one Hot Momma Rw

Really surprised there wasn't a VERY generous tip for her as they left...she went WAY above and beyond...!

My wife was the stripper of choice for all of our friends' bachelor parties, as well as for mine. All in fun, and she never once fucked anyone or gave any blowjobs. Just good clean naked fun. No STD's, no unwanted babies, no regrets.

well i loved it i wanna suck and lick all those women that love sitting on a face after their pussies get abused and cumm in i love it if ever in vegas dont be afraid too give me your well fucked and filled with gangbang of cum yum yum lea me a msg

i wish my wife would do that and then i would clean her with my tounge i love the taste of cum and pussy it looks so hot ozzzzing outy and know ing she just concord all those cocks filling her id give her ping pong balls to stuff up there and save it hot and freash for me

Great story!

Exactly what this media is for.

Best Comment:

"Why are there so many self hating cucks out there that feel the need to thrash a story after shooting their load to it?"

Time for all you negative viewers go elsewhere.

Hope your qife got knocked up by them

Wow so many angry cucks jumping all over folks who the accuse to be like them but aren’t. Not sure if you spend outside of Cuckville but normal guys aren’t getting off watching their wife become everyone’s cum bucket. You are so desperate that they only way to save the business if for weak and wimpy hubby to become a pimp and wife a full blown whore. Awful and ridiculous

I been the girl at parties that been gang banged by all of the guys there the most was 14 guys . A few of them fucked me 2xs all of them blew there loads in my pussy. I do all different types of partys. I love it.

I love the story. I love both of their reactions and interaction. I own my own business so understand doing what you have to do for success. I am a fan.

Loved the story. My husband and I could be that couple. Organizing, putting on private parties for various events. Including bachelor, bachelorette, birthday, coming of age, retirement parties, etc. Nothing much off the table.

First read this a number of years ago. Entertaining as much this time as last. And reading the stupid comments from the anonymous incels is funny also

Absolutely loved it. All the stars!

♥️♥️♥️🔥🔥🔥

Same old stripper plot. Stripper missing, replaced and fucked. Slut borne again and cuck ascending loved every minute and the rest is for the latrine. What’s new? Nuthinnnnn !!!

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Hope they paid the CUCK well for his whore wife...

Cuck husband whore wife

Yikes

Now he's a pimp and she's a prostitute.

When she said she did not get to fuck her favorite cock yet, he should have asked "who's cock did you forget now"? We can discuss having marital sex after you get tested for all STD's and a pregnancy test. Nite sweetheartt

Totally enjoyed your story

What a bunch of whining fucks. ITS JUST A STORY!!!

Hot story until the first boy suddenly stuck his cock in her. I had rape vibes, then recovered when I learned she liked it. Hot resumed. Looking back though I feel bad for her and her husband. The scene at the end did not change my pity for them.

Their business was for preparing parties and now is an excuse for pimping her

She wanted another guy she can have him I wouldn't have anything to do with her anymore and him whoring her out he isn't even a man cause no man would do that to his wife

Saved as a favorite the first time I read it.