Backsliding

@26thNC As a Christian myself, I don't appreciate the kind of church the author describes in the first part of the story. That's not a Christian church....that's a controlling, "supply-side Jesus" church.

Most of the problems people have with Christian behaviour is with that type of church, not real, Jesus-following Christians.

Even Jesus had problems with that kind of church behaviour, so it's hardly without precedent for it to be made fun of.

Another dickhead author who thinks it’s cute to make fun of Christians. Why not write about the happy times down at the Al Farouk Mosque and massage parlor.

Effort into writing

Story nothing

I loved the story and series. Sarah sounds a lot like my wife, except my wife hasn't backslid. Yet.... maybe.... I hope...

Are people satisfied with an absolutely zero-nuance jackass, cussin' and a drinkin' and shakin' his callous-knuckled fist at heaven like a completely worthless moron? This is a truly ridiculous portrayal. God, what a waste of time.

There are some great preacher-wife cheating stories on this website. Like the one who takes singing lessons from the organ-ist and gets massively drilled. Very well written. But this current story? Just garbage from the first word to the last.

Adiós!

To see an innocent woman open up the doors to her passion it can be explosive. Love the story

This might be the best story ever! Wish I could meet the couple behind it. You can't write this without having some experience in it.

You have her started, now you both need to bring a third person in. Male or female? Your choice but most of us guys would probably rather read about her getting it from a strange guy while hubby cheers her on.

Also a good insight into the super religious every day life. Looking forward to the rest. Not sure how I missed the series when it started.

just how far will she go. please continue

Very few stories get my attention like this one did. It is right on the verge of going off in a different direction and I hope you take it in a good one and not mess it up by having her get knocked up by the pastor and him liking it for example.

Good story so far

PLEASE CONTINUE..

I like where this is going, please continue it.

I enjoyed this story very much. Hope there is more to come. Shame there is no voting section for this story. It is certainly worth top marks. Look forward to more.

i will give it a 6

Very original and enjoyable read, but why did you end it abruptly?

Very different and very entertaining. Looking forward to reading your future stories. Thanks for sharing.

more like a read across of the real story. no heart in it.

Very unique -- made it interesting.

I really dug the story. An interesting backstory, a cool progression, and a hot finish. It is a great stand-alone short, or could could be the start of an interesting series. It could go anywhere. I enjoyed your writing style. Maybe a little brief and conclusory at times, could have been fleshed out more with additional scenes and dialogue, but the point is made and the story does not lack depth, considering its length. I look forward to more of your writings.

BTW, I had a fling with a girl like the wife in this story while in college. She was from a small, rural, conservative Lutheran sect, and she attended the same small Lutheran college that I attended. She had the uncut hair, no makeup, long skirts, high-necked long-sleeved blouses, etc. I was the first guy she ever dated who was not one of her fellow flock-members. We had a great time. I guess I was the 'bad boy' she needed to have come into her life. Lasted about 4 months. It was an experience; for both of us. I actually felt kind of bad at times, like I was a fucking devil or something, with the stuff I got her to do. But, we actually parted as friends. Anyway, that little spark to be a 'bad girl' is definitely there for these types of girls-no doubt. I like how you brought that out in your story.