Bad Teacher Ch. 05

Oh no we forgot protection YET AGAIN. Herp derp aren't we quite the pair teehee. Oh well, if I get knocked up, so be it. Of course at this point she wants him to cum inside her. Good slut!

I really do wish he'd call her Carmen instead of Mrs. G. He's fucking her on the regular now, call her by her damn name you moron. At this rate she'll be his 3-hole cumslut slave by the end of the week. She's got it bad for his monster cock.

This story is bit over the top, and with all the spelling errors and bad English, you need to go back to High School and retake your English class. You can get a free down version of a spell check software program. The ripping off the buttons on a blouse seems a little stupid, since it only takes a minute to undo them. That sort B.S. will not make People read your stories. You need to make them sound real enough to hold the readers interest. The fact that you constantly kept referring to Mrs. G as your best friends mom every time instead of her given name of Carmine. I think your just kid writing fiction stories to enhance your fantasies about older married women.

(8/22/2022) Well.., I’ve been giving Ryan the benefit of the dought, up to this point. But it seems to me that he doesn’t care about his married lover. She’s just a cum bucket to him. He constantly places her in untenable situations and he is now recording their affair. We all know who will suffer the most if they should be found out. Carmen's life will come crashing down destroying her marriage and her relationship with her son. And of course, ending her career. Ryan would be admonished by the adults but he would be considered a hero by his peers. Yup.., this character is a psychopath, IMO. He may not be capable of redemption. Constantly calling her “Mrs. G” is very redundant and so takes away from the kink, IMO. How about calling her Carmen and focusing on her wedding band? There so much screaming going on. Are all the rest of the characters deaf or are all the walls in the Grant home and the school soundproof? She said, "Don't look so schmuck, stud”. Shouldn’t it be “smug” instead of “schmunk”? Ryan is no fool and I’m sure Carmen wouldn't call him one, IMO. I’ve given chapters one through four all five stars but this chapter doesn’t rate five stars. Sorry, but this is my opinion.

Don’t know if it’s the word count or your braggadocio need, but it’s not necessary to repeat yourself on the fact your fucking your best friend’s mom, her name Carmen, she’s your Spanish teacher…at least not three times on the same page. You have a good plot, though you do need an editor: to (destination - going to slap the shit outta you) when it’s too (slap the shit outta you too). Still gave you 5*

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