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Ryan was so proud of himself as he watched her wrapping her body up in her robe, and he decided that as a memento he wanted to take a picture of her ass and pussy. Jodie protested until he mentioned the final $100, then silently and resentfully dropped the robe again as he stood to get his camera from the shelf.
Unaware of the patch of melted ice on the floor, Ryan slipped a little and as he put his hand out to steady himself, he accidentally knocked Jodie's very expensive laptop onto the floor, smashing the screen and casing, and making several tiny components rattle around inside.
Jodie, who had watched this open-mouthed, drew herself up to her full height and, standing face-to-face with her annoying brother found her courage build inside her.
"Okay you bastard," she snarled at him through gritted teeth as she reached out and grabbed a TV remote control from the shelf, "bend the fuck over the desk. You've got $900 to work off."
- COMMENTS
carocbritonover 8 years agoauthor was perfect in avoid what 99%+ of non-consent stories do; have the woman/ girl "get wet against her will; her body betrayed her" bullshit, an example in this story was that the sister's pussy was dry, she did cum
Anonymousabout 12 years agoI thought it was hot, and well written. A good reluctance story. The ending but about the lap top was funny as hell. I think ~if~ you did a sequal, the brother should already have the money needed to pay her back. What can I say, rooting for the under-dog! (Well...he Was the under-dog...before this story :D)
~Assume
RockyStoneabout 12 years agoI liked the end of the story, because little brother did need his lessons. I didn't find the writing sensual. It could be that this type of story isn't what I like best. I saw a few misspellings, but nothing huge to remark about. When it comes to judging morality and such, I remember where I'm reading the story.
RS
Anonymousabout 12 years agoIt's not rape it's reluctance, there's a difference.
The girl only really protested at the ice and clearly didn't struggle otherwise, and also gave instruction, telling the brother to 'go slowly', not to stop.
