Black Sheep Ch. 01

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LaRascasse
LaRascasse
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My mind was wrung out and my body exhausted. I walked past the white hallway to the large freezer which would surely have something in it to victual me for the night. I had barely entered the dining area when I stubbed my toe on something.

"Fuck!" I hissed at the pain coursing through my foot. The room was pitch black. I groped against the wall for a while before I found the switch and flicked it on. My eyes took some time to adjust to the brightness after which I proceeded to get my gastronomic salvation: cold fudge. I sat down and enjoyed it at the table itself.

There was a crash in the adjacent living room. My parents had probably left the window open and the wind had made a vase fall, or so I thought...

In reality, a different sight awaited me. My feet came to a screeching halt at the door. This room was better lit and the pale moonlight shone off the paler skin of my dear Aunt Hannah. She was on her knees, bent over the ottoman while a large silhouette held her hips and pounded away in a steady rhythm. She opened her mouth and looked indistinctly out the window. The silhouette was too tall to be Uncle Brent.

My body utterly failed me in that instance. My feet were paralysed and my eyes were wide open, matching my mouth. Each stroke into my aunt's rear end was followed by a ripple of her milky white flesh. Her eyes closed and then opened again, her face contorted in ecstasy.

I could just about tear my eyes away from the first scene before I saw the fragments of my Mom's favourite Ming vase on the floor. She was less than upset about it, given the look on her face as she bounced on the chiselled torso of her brother-in-law. Her gaze alternated between her own lover and the ottoman where her sister was being defiled.

Brent thrust his upwards, lifting Marilyn clear off the bed and she crashed down, impaling herself on his throbbing erection. She let out a squeal and then resumed her motions, riding him with gusto. His fingers sank into her flesh and controlled her movements. The entire scene seemed to be have been rehearsed to perfection in a theatre of the absurd.

Obscured in the darkness, I finally managed to get some motion back in my legs and made my way back to my room, unnoticed. I was too used to it to be upset or nauseated any longer, but each time opened a fresh scar in my psyche.

I passed Lucy's room and briefly considered talking to her. All jokes apart, she was the closest I had to a friend. I knocked on the door and waited.

"Come in."

I walked in and saw her lying on her front, facing her laptop with a frustrated expression.

"How's the chapter coming?"

"It's not," she snapped and rolled her eyes. "This is hopeless."

"I think I'll get out of your hair then."

She looked up at me and her expression changed to one of mild concern. She sat up and ushered me over.

"What's wrong, Damien?"

I shrugged lightly and looked at her with a lop-sided smirk.

"I went to get a midnight snack and -"

"Oh God! Don't tell me," Lucy began and I nodded in silent assent of her incomplete sentence.

"I'm so sorry, buddy," she said. "Here, sit down." She patted part of the bed close to her. She draped her arm over my shoulders and brought my face close to hers.

"I used to feel the same way you do, Damien," Lucy said softly. "Believe me, it wasn't good. But eventually I decided I had to learn to accept the way everyone around me is and go with the flow. So I write to distract myself. Otherwise, I'd go insane."

I looked at her and saw a genial smile of understanding.

"Come on," she smiled. "Let's go for a midnight stroll to the gazebo and talk some more."

"What about your chapter?"

"Screw the chapter," Lucy said. "My brother is more important. His Lordship will just have to accept that I write at my own pace."

She held my hand and caressed the back of it with her fingers. I smiled for the first time all day and got up from her bed.

"By the way," she said with her most mischievous smile. "I think you and Kurt would look good feeding each other breadsticks. Shame you turned him down."

I threw my hands up in exasperation and followed her outside.

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rayironyrayironyover 1 year ago
Giggle-worthy

Convention reversal is almost always satisfying

AEisMeAEisMeabout 8 years ago

So you *can* write funny, well written stories that aren't sad or tragic. (Though I've thus far only read the first chapter. Crossing my fingers you don't manage to kill off any characters in the next ones.) Love this so far. It had me cackling aloud and snorting like an idiot.

Random notes:

- Want to both protect Damien and corrupt him.

- I kinda want to read Lucy's erotica. She's seen it all live and first hand so I'm sure it's pretty good.

- Despite Aunt Hannah's claim, not all of us are thirsting for gay porn. I support the lifestyle but it's frustrating to see hot men go at it and know you've got nothing to offer that they want.

Off to read chapter 2!

DonnaBeckDonnaBeckabout 9 years ago
That was a fun read

Thank you, LaRascasse, for making me smile. You pretty much owed me since your other stories made me cry. 5 stars and well done!

RedMonkeyButtRedMonkeyButtalmost 11 years ago
Nice!

I don't venture into H&S all that often and only have a story here because that's where it got put when I submitted it. Because of this, I only found your story because of your post on the forums.

In the spirit of leaving actual feedback that doesn't involve a drooling fangirl moment, I have to disagree with the forum comment about this being a lot of purple prose. I actually know quite a few geeks who talk like this on a regular basis, but I have to say it's a breath of fresh air to see it written out. I did catch a couple spots where you missed or misspelled a word, but they weren't bad enough to turn me off from the story.

Overall, you do a good job of bringing the MCs thoughts across. Not just in the 1st person POV, but in the writing itself. Damien is a "normal" kid having to deal with a deviant family. Take the term normal however you want. The flip-flopped positions of the parents versus the teenager is brilliant.

I look forward to reading the next chapter. Since you'll see this on your recent activity, I'm not going to repeat myself over on the forum.

KarenasKarenasalmost 11 years ago
Love It

You know I think you're so talented--and this story proves it. Love the characters! Can't wait to see what happens next!

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