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Click here"Ah, I'll take the shower and dress option," Melody said nervously. "Can I go then?"
"You may. I don't think we should bother about our date next week though. I trust this will be the last I hear of you. I have to admit, you've been a serious disappointment to me."
"You're disappointed," muttered Melody, walking into the en suite. "Think of how I feel."
Watching her leave ten minutes later, Andrew rubbed his chin thoughtfully. He had a feeling that this wasn't the last he'd hear of Melody. He was pleased that he had that photo of her driver's license.
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I would have liked more details in the sex, and about the spanking too. Details make me cum, as it is, it just made me good and wet.
I like your style but not all your stories. This is a winner please continue this could be a interesting series. Thanks for sharing.
Your use of the "ten minutes" was repetitive. And it all kind of had a... Fake feel to it. It was very slow to start and you kind of ruined any feeling of depth to the story due to the beginning. It was hard to get into. Better luck next time! :)