- Non-Erotic
- Bloodbath
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Click hereAnger raged in Samael as he drew his knife and quickly thrust it at the man with the pistol, hitting his mark in the mans lower right shoulder. He quickly sped forward, grabbing the gun and slid behind the two men. He shot off two shots, both to the back of the head, followed by THUMP THUMP! Sam panted lightly and made his way to Rosalina cadaver.
"Rosalina..." he began, as his eyes filled with tears. A slight murmur came from her body. He leaned down quickly.
"Sam...I...Love...You..." she wisped, in a voice that could almost be carried away by the wind. Sam's tears fell upon her face as her eyes grew cold and glazed over. Sam sat there, crying, for as long as he could remember.
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Sam sat in his chair, in front of the fireplace, dreaming. A silent tear ran down his face, but still undisturbed and still dreaming. I will get her back, he constantly thought, she didn't deserve to die...I will bring her back. Rosalina, I promise...
- COMMENTS
TheFallenCrossabout 16 years agoits funky
of course my grammar aint that great neither, i'd like to see it progress,
Anonymousover 16 years agoand there are indeed parts of 6 or 7 stories put together randomly. You add details that mean nothing "M3 shotgun"
there are too many mistakes in grammer to try to guess what some parts were intended to say.
Anonymousover 16 years agoThere's a good story line buried in there, I think; probably; maybe. But there are so many writing blunders that it is almost impossible to read the story.
-- KK in Texas
