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Click hereThen why do you leave me? I felt out of sorts.
He shook his head and turned away from me, hiding his face, but not before I saw the wounded expression cross his striking features.
I watched the crowd swallow him up, everyone around him hardly moving, holding an eerie tableau. Then something was yanked loose deep inside my gut and the crowd jerked into motion. The noise of the music and shouting filled my ears again. I shuddered, still feeling the inexplicable heat tingling over every inch of my skin.
"Rina!" Angela appeared at my side, making me jump. She eyed me with a smirk and handed me a fresh blue drink. "What's wrong? You look like you've just run a marathon."
I touched my forehead and cringed as my fingers came away damp. Not a marathon. More like a sprint; a sprint away from rolling, spitting magma.
I think I've read this story a million times but every time, every damn time it gets to me. Well this goes to all your stories. You're an amazing writer xo
I'm so glad I finally started this series. I first found you because of hockey, and read all of those stories. Even the one by PennLady. So when I finished the last series, I missed you so much I kept checking for updates. But there were none, and I finally decided to read this one. I could just kick my butt for waiting so long!! But better late than never. (:
Great start! The heroine seems like a tale filled with tall strangers and mysterious underwater adventures would do her just good!
Bahaha. I haven't even read it yet- I just wanted to say that you totally made my day by setting this in Calgary. I'm guessing you're a Flames fan?
I love this and can't wait to see where you take it. Love your other stuff as well, but it's always fun to read something different and you are doing a great job. Keep it up!
on the other site and LOVED it. Not your usual but you did it so well. I am intrigued and eagerly awaiting more.
When's the next one coming!!!! I keep looking for the next chapter already lol. Please hurry.
Sorry I'm late getting to it. Very nice and very different. Can't wait to see what else happens. :)
I don't normally read this sort of story but as it is your work I thought I should try it.
Can't wait for more!
Although this is different from your other stories I love it!!! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!!