All Comments on 'Bound'

I absolutely loved this story! It is very well written!

ok i maybe new to these things but wow love that story very much like my real life hahah but wow wish we had a club like that!! thank you for making me feel normal and proud

You are a very talented writer. I loved this story. It was a fantastic read, I look forward to reading more of Your stories. :)

Excellent job. A master to be admired.

This was without a doubt the best story I've ever read on this site, or anywhere else for that matter! Well done.

that was truly an amazing story! and very well written! keep writing please!

This is the best story I have ever read on this or any other site!!!! PLEASE keep on writing and if you ever decide to publish a book let us know, you could do it!!

I love that the focus is on pleasure for both the Don and the sub. Part of me really connected to many aspects of Jessica 's personality. Wonderfully done, can't wait for more!!!

Great job!

Best story I have ever read EVER, it's so easy to connect with Jessica and I love how you've brought it all together! xx

Great story! but if she is the boss how does he have fancy apartment and limos?

Jackson, and the blackmail

Great story. Wow...got me dripping. :)

truely a breathtaking story

I loved your story, but I wish that he didn't have to blackmail her into submission. Maybe with the more conventional means of falling in love? But other than that, I loved it.

Loved it! Got me quite wet and . . . ahem! And blackmail, ah yes, very nice touch.

Really didn't appreciate the racial stereotyping in this story - massive turn-off and lazy writing.

I really loved this story! I thought it was well written and realistic! Thank you.

How did I miss this story.Absolutely the best of its category

Well written overall; you do have some skill with this. Did not like the blackmail; true submission is a gift to be given, not something that can be coerced or forced. And maybe it's just me, but I felt that some of her orgasms were unrealistic...especially that first one.

..... I've been on Literotica, this is by far the best story I've ever read. Beautiful. Sad that I didn't find this one much, much earlier.

I loved it, unrealistic orgasm who cares, it was terrific.

I ,do agree I was put off by the black mail, I actually left the story at that part.

I came back and read the rest, I understand why you used it, but it was unsettling.

I've read this story twice now and both times it has entertained and excited me. I'm still learning about my own submissive nature and reading stories like this one helps me to understand it a bit better. Thank you for the excitement, I truly enjoy your work.

I did enjoy the story, it was truly a wonderful example of a powerful woman giving into a submissive side of herself, although I do have to agree with some of the other comments. Some of the orgasms were a little unrealistic, but that made the story all the more enjoyable. It showed that there is true, unfiltered enjoyment in being submissive. I really disliked the blackmail part though. That seemed to boarder on a form of rape. But the rest of the story truly redeemed that small bit of unpleasantness.

WOW, great story, amazing writing.

great story i loved how it was believable unlike some other stories , i really hope to see a part 2 and would love for it to stay at the same level of kinkyness and not turn into some hardcore crap.

thanks alot had a great time reading.

Absolutely amazing! Only the best stories make my pussy throb like this! Instant favorite!

I nearly came without touching my pussy. well done!

That was one of the hottest things I have ever read! I expected my monitor to catch fire before I was finished. Well done, very well done. Thank you.

Reading this story along with girlfriend was undoubtedly a great descision we made as she was almost as explosive as Jessica at the end of the story.

I don't like the bitch/slut crap, but fine, I'll deal. You lost me when Jake pulled the video blackmail crap. That reeks of psycho bastard and any hotness after doesn't matter. I'm so angry I wouldn't enjoy the rest of the story so I came here to vent. It seems many did like it. Perhaps I'm missing out but you hit a limit. I'm also sad because I do enjoy a strong dom (that doesn't use crappy cop outs to manage/lead).

Very well written, erotic and building in tempo and excitement. Very solid. My only question is why the blackmail, you had her, were controlling her, what difference did the photos or video matter, she was giving herself to you without it. BUT, still excellent.

My slut cunt has drizzled during the entire read, I have filled my chair with juices and am rock hard (nipples). OMG I am soooo horny. Would love to find chapter 2 soon, till then, my husband and his friends have quite a job in trying to control my rage of need...............bring it on boys!!

Please more, this story holds a range of options and potential.........we are all waiting.

Nadine

So I can purchase my very own Jake for only $280,999.00? What a bargain that would be!

This was by far my favourite story ever! I've been reading Literotica for years and this story drove me crazy over and over! I just love the way you can mix using for mutual pleasure and still add in enough emotion to make women like me swoon knowing I'd lap it up and beg for more... more... please?....

It was well written but it was missing some background. The characters were lacking as they wasn't anything known about them to actually really get into the story. But still, it was pretty good.

The way that you described the whole setting and the way in which each of the characters felt and responded to the situation/setting they were in made me feel as if I was there with them. This is definitely one of the best stories that I have read on this site.

NICE!!!Fucken cool

have been a literotica non consent addict for over six years. This is the first story ever that i had to bundle up the towel into a 9cm shape. Couldnt stop orgasming. Well written excellent story.

Can't wait to find out were they go from here. It takes a really good writer to keep me coming back for more.

Absolutely BRILLIANT, a wonderful way with words and how you manipulate Jessica the BOSS into the submissive woman craving your cock in her ass is fantastic. Keep her coming back for more. She is so desirous of that hard cock in her rear, I love the way she orgasms as she thinks about it entering her and fucking her up her tight little ass.

I don't know how I skipped the blackmail in this story, but I certainly wouldn't have given it a five star rating had I not. I loathe the inclusion of blackmail/sextortion in these stories, mostly because we see a greater preponderence of it IRL. Fortunately more and more people are turning their would be blackmailers into the police and we're seeing these morally bankrupt assholes imprisoned with more regularity. Is the sex in this story hot? Oh yes it is, but the mere presence of blackmail in a story outside the non-consent category pretty much sours it for me.

Not very found of this one, you had a good base, but characters, their dialogue and situation wasn't very believable. Good try and a sound idea just not very good execution in my option.

This has got to be one of the BEST stories i have read...

This is the perfect fantasy story for me! Loved the exhibitionism- I could feel that!

Very hot!

This is...I cant even... I'm not into exabition myself, but this is just so hot, i have more than half a mind to show this to my master...for future reference. I cant believe how much teasing jake got from her, he has amazing willpower, ill give him that for sure!

I am pretty new to even reading about kinky stuff...but this one was so amazing it completely blew my mind!

I really like this story. Jake is so controlled but at the same time wild. It was really sweet too, the ending especially!

That story was very well written. I liked the slow transition into each act and how he was tender with his sternness throughout. The psychological buildup you created was fantastic and I was disappointed it ended after just 5 pages :(

The only things I would change which did not sit well with me are the blackmail and the Jackson character.

To my understanding, BDSM is about consent and doing it of one's own volition.

As for Jackson, he read like the driver from Driving Miss Daisy, like a caricature you had seen and copied. I would change that stereotypical aspect of him.

Other than those aspects, good read.

This is what I dream about if only there was a man to make it true.

I found this story not too long or too short, it's just the right length, at least for me. Nice build-up to all the intense action. Only thing I would've changed/omitted is the blackmailing part. We'll- written! :)

I like your writing style and the plot line. Everything flows in a logical manner, making what would seem like an impossible feat, become a total reality.

Keep up the great work!!!

Amazing and very helpful to new submissives about understanding our feelings. Also I have never been more wet! ;)

Oh my god, so hot. I can only wish I was born the right sex so I could have what Jessica just got. I've been shaking in my seat, going nuts to keep myself from risking a public indecency charge.

Best I've read, it had me dripping, I couldve lost my virginity if there was a guy next to me.

I was so riveted to your story. I just want more and talk about hot and wet. Very nice work. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Jessica's training begins, perhaps. Totally sexy!!!

I've been too shy to ever try this type of relationship but the whole excitement and the sweet cuddling after it was over was just so loving. My own orgasms have never been that strong and even though my husband would eat me he wouldn't do other foreplay so it was always very weak and took too long. Great story! I'll be finding more of your stories in the future ;)

Well written by one who understands..... I and My girl both appreciated it and hope for many more as Jessica's training progresses. Master Rain Swansong

This was very nice, I liked it a lot. You could expand on it very easily. :) two thumbs up.

I loved reading your story and I even caught myself getting wet of it! Wished my boyfriend would be that kinky!

Keep going and lot's of love

Submissive Lola <3

Would love to enjoy this with my husband. We are just beginning to play at submission. Can't wait to take the next steps.

I haven't had this many orgasms in months! I was wet within minutes of the beginning and a mess by the end. Wonderfully written.

This was absolutely Delicious!

That was...delicious. Very hot, but more than that -- very well written, interesting story line, excellent characters. Kudos to you! =)

Very well written, thank you for sharing.

I enjoyed reading your work.

I'm not a fan of bdsm, dom/sub, or humiliation - but this is well done. He did what he did because he already loved her and could see what her need was, even before she could. She might have gone on for years being the lonely ice-queen but for him. I know nothing of this life but that what is usually read about and the people I've met seem to fall into this lifestyle because they take pleasure in control, humiliation, and inflicting pain. I know I'm generalizing and that isn't fair, but to those of you who practice any form of bdsm, that is what the world sees. But this is done well. I wonder if he ever simply makes love to her. Sometimes THAT is what someone needs.

That was really enjoyable. You had me breathing heavily throughout.

I definitely enjoyed your story. By 1/2 way through I was reaching for my vibrator. Keep up the good work.

Excellent story and very well written.

Still worth 5*.

My panties are soaked. I wanted to be Jessica!!

I loved this story, but like the other comments, "BLACKMAIL" produced a pit in my stomach! UGH!!! You are a phenomenal writer BUT you should not have included the blackmail. I so desired to be Jessica while I read each line.

others outline the characterisation issues, so I wont repeat them, except to say that they are severe. But... competent if not great- and the author aint the first and wont be the last to fall into the same trap.

I loved this story and hope you will continue their story.

I loved this story. I even had to finish reading it at work. I really liked the characters esp his affection for her.

It was a joy to read just to see most of the words were spelt correctly! Hoorah! The characters in this story suck though! Nothing to like about anyone in this. If and when you can instill some humanity and warmth into your characters the story will be much improved. Gave it a 3.

Excellent! Well written, both grammatically and graphically. The action very well described especially when it came to the build up to and the actual orgasms. Would suggest a sequel but I can't imagine where else it could go. Surprise us!

Excellently written & by far the best example of it's genre I have ever read

My compliments Sir

Thx for writing this awesome story its definitely the best d/s story i ever read I have read it 3x by now thats how much I enjoyed it compliments to you ❤️

Love how quickly you take her into her unexplored submissive and Jake’s artistic and intuitive guidance. Always love anal exploding orgasms

And well written

Just what I needed to escape the tedium of an ultra-vanilla, unhappy marriage.

What a story to draw me back into the midst of the wonderful and sparkly world of D/s. This entire story brought back such wonderful memories. I loved the power exchange/mind fucks. Thank you for this journey ❤️

Doesn't even feel as though it's bdsm. It obviously is but it's so well written it comes over as almost a romance!! Well done.

So well written... erotic, orgasmic, and romantic overload!!! I've read this story 4 times!! Would love to read more of their adventures!

Love this story, I read it several years ago and spent a lot of time trying to re-find it. It is so hot, the romance, power, and pleasure is a perfect mix.

Long, involved, WONDERFIL! Made me hot & wishing for the same ecstasy!

is it possible in real life ?

will a chick come that hard without lube from anal has anyone tried it ?

slow and no lube in anal does it fell good for her ?

please tell i wanna try it on her convince her

5star

too bad in real life guys lose interest in girls like rebecca and ditch them for someone younger and innocent ?he conquered her got everything from her so why would he love her or be with her provided he has the blackmail video he can pass her to other guys or sell videos online ?why would he love her she has fulfilled his purpose

no need for romance with a public whore like jessica dont you all agree?

is there a 2nd part to it?

jessica is a real wanton whore

👍

I loved the BDSM, hated the Blackmail. Physicaly grabbing her by the elbow and pushung into the presure point? not cool. Nope, the dick belongs in Jail. A real pity, it could be a great story and didnt really need that plot device to make it work, sorry.

Re the comment about anal without lube: note that in the story, Jake's cock is lubed from having been in Jessica's pussy. Pussy juice isn't the world's best anal lube but it's better than nothing. Going in totally dry risks giving your partner a nasty anal tear, or at least never being invited up there again in your life. Don't try it.

That being said, this is a great story. The meticulous descriptions of sex from Jessica's POV are absolutely brilliant.

Blackmailing is a real turn-off, and would ruin any future trust rather effectively. I think he also pushed her ahead too fast. Other than that, nice story.

I get that people dislike the blackmail, but in this case it was clearly used to give her an excuse to succumb to what she secretly needed and desired. Taking the choice away allowed her to more easily relinquish her need to control. It was permission.

If this isn’t an authentic love story, then I don’t know what is. Bravo!

Wow. Fuck. Insanely good. Sometimes I love slow character development, and sometimes I love straightup nonstop sex. This story does the latter so well.

Excellent! Nice buildup that ended with a bang figuratively and literally. The parts from her pov showed that she was more than willing even with the implied blackmail. This was as much about the mind game as the sex and done very nicely.

Wow! Just wow … fucking amazing!

Very nice, very well written 👍

She needed to add "Master" at the end.

Wow there were a few parts not quite believable but the end was great