All Comments on 'Calling Home'

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Orion623Orion623over 16 years ago
A Bit of a Change

Quin writes as effectively as always. His stories are filled with teasing lines from the wife and angst from the husband. However in this piece there is a different approach used by the author. The husband in 'Calling Home' states that he and his wife have gone through a separation due to her extramarital affair. This indicates a degree of disgust and strong disapproval by the husband. Yet when the wife takes up again with several men we find the husband on the phone, cock in hand, waiting for his wife to tell all about her newest affair. This represents a 180 degree turnaround by the husband which IMO makes this story less believable and less likeable than his other works.****** I am not a fan of cockold stories but Quin writes so well that I have come to look forward to his offerings. This story doesn't come up to either of the 'Housewives' stories or the 'Letters to the Editor' story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Really bad submissive English Sub-Man

I have to say this is really bad erotic couplings or group sex. It sure isnt loving wives. It might be submissive husband so it could go in BDSM for the Dom/Sub or maybe the English sub-man category.<P>

Just really bad and not to believable unless this guy is a fag to start with.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
All the real aAmerican men (below) are busy ------

Literotica hoping that they can get hard and satisfy their poor starving for sex wives.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
if..

there would be a -100 you would have got it. they allready allmost separeted before and now he likes it, her shity games ? everbody would have said : I'm busy filing for divorce and hang up.

Gary_LostGary_Lostover 16 years ago
Wimp story

Literotica home of the wimps. Don't even bother reading this story if you are a man. This story is for man haters and wimps.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
The best is back

Why can't some of the a******les on here tell the difference between fantasy and reality you are the man please dont make us wait so long again

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Is this supposed to be erotic?

Watching some clown make a fool of himself because he wants his wife to fuck around on him is painful to watch. Make the husband realistic. Have him call the cops, change the locks...something other than being the wimp that he is written as.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
How Many Wimp Husband Stories Are There?

Too many. I really pity these "writers." They have no talent, no imagination, and they aren't men. How pathetic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
another....

....dickless guy. should just let his gay side come out. then he'll know what a cock feels like.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
The Great Quin

strikes again! The purpose of Quin's stories is clear to all who have read his long history of submissons, and he is one of the very best. They are so good, i go back and read them over and over again. I can't wait for the next one!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Question

And this is supposed to be a loving married couple?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
just record

then you have divorce material and can also sue rob and friends for seducing your wife and alienation of affection ...anyway you can divorce her or just live with her make her divorce you do the same thing she did fuck as many wome nas yo u can maybe even pay for some

jthserrajthserraover 16 years ago
Nicely done...

An interesting look at the dynamics of a relationship, the pain, heartbreak, and yet love, that something that keeps a person coming back. Apparently your characters didn't act nice enough to satisfy some of the commenters. I found the story readable, the dialogue believable and the emotion compelling. This is one of those where you can actually count all those zero ratings as 5s, your characterization and dialogue got them involved enough to be outraged. The level of outrage confirms how good the story is.

well done.

jim : )

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
go back

wimp

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Contagious

Whatever the hell Samual X has, it seems to be spreading to other wannabe writers - same ol crap as his offerings. Skip this and all others from this wannabe writer

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Warning Helpful

I'm not into stories where guys get off letting their mate screw others.

Also, your story does not logically hold together. You start with how damaged their marraige was by her previous affair. Then he wimps out and enjoys it. Why didn't he enjoy it the first time? When he heard she was with "Rob", he should have been excited.

My name is Ttom, I can't get the login to work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
People having lives!

If people had lives they wouldn`t have to spend time with these stories to try and lift their boredom, and the zero vote was for the story NOT the writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Author Please for all of our sanity PLEASE

kill yourself .

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Huh?

WTF? A completely discombobulated story. It started one way, then radically changed into another. I couldn't get into the characters or story, sorry. Next!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
She should charge a 100 each and get something.

You paint the wife as a slutty whore of a woman with no control over herself or her actions. She is talked up by three men and gives in to sex with them. She lies on the phone about car trouble when she had simply stopped to get fucked. The husband goes into all this detail about how they almost divorced before/split up and worked their way thru it. This story explains how little she cares for her husband and how she has no morals or ethics and is somewhat genetically handicapped in the mental department. The husband on the other hand after expressing how he had hurt him before is supposed to change and get all excited over her being used as a cum dump by three men. She is without morals or ethics and is disrespect and unloyal to her husband and marriage. He on the other hand is showing signs of a complete mental breakdown and the associated mental illnesses so involved. Taking them out of the gene pool would be a blessing, suicide a welcome item for them both. Eventually one or the other of them will break and kill the other anyway.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Get a life?

I doubt whether anon who worried about losing 15 secs of his life has much of a life to worry about.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

Fucking WIMP!!!!

Why the hell didn't you put a warning FIRST, before I wasted 30 seconds of my life reading before I REALISED what kind of story it was!!!

I realise some people like this kind of thing, but to be fair to the rest of us you should have put a warning as an intro!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Blah

Wish the wimp ass writer would have stayed in what ever hole he fell into. To many of these dipshits on here as it is.

skip.69skip.69over 16 years ago
Welcome back

It's great to have you back again, Quin. I always look forward to your stories, and have now read every one of them at least three or four times. Can't wait to see how this one progresses, even though the previous comment derided it. Don't be too long with the next instalment, please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
W.T.F.

I don't blame her for being with real men, god knows she doesn't have one at home. Sluts and wimps, magic.

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