All Comments on 'Celestial Matters'

Its well past midnight now but I couldn't stop reading. That could just well be the best story on this site. I applaud you as a fellow writer, you should possibly consider publishing this. Like, legit.

I love the story! Unfortunately, I can only give it 4 stars due to the abundance of grammatical errors that made a number of passages difficult and a few nearly unreadable.

Keep writing, but keep an eye out for proper verb tense and those pesky homophones!

Once again, great story! I'm off to read the sequel!

Might try again another time. It could use an editor as there are tons of errors that disrupt the flow of the story. I really hated that she called him Demon and the Mr Demon. That made me dry up instantly. Also hated the use of the word 'giggled' in reference to him. Wtf.

I have been reading this story for days and I hated leaving. Besides the grammar issues, you made a flawless combination of erotic and storyline scenes. I am looking forward to reading the rest of the story.

Amazing balance. Came for the sex stayed for the plot and story. Damn!

I am out at page no. 7, it's too long for me to keep on........

Im hooked came for sex pun inteanded and fell in love

Loved it

Completely blown away by this what the hell, I wasn’t expecting to actually read something GOOD

I hope you come out with a second installment!

This was wonderful. Thank you.

I have to say I didn't see that one coming. Clever.

I am absolutely infatuated with Celestial Matters. You get the dominant male lead better than any author I have ever read on Literotica. I was enticed throughout the entire story. I couldn't stop reading it... and playing with myself, I might add. Very sexy. Thank you for submitting!

For once I am so invested in the story instead of the erotica. This was amazing and I can't wait to read more!

Absolutely outstanding! Could not stop until i was done..... great writings

Impressive and captivating!!

This was shocking, as you already know or guessed.

It had a full plot but it wasn't muddled with everything, through the whole thing you could still process and grasp the information being given to. Which the plot heavily relied on the lore and facts being given to you as you read.

Not to mention that compared to everything else this had plot along with erotic scenes. Though it wasn't just everywhere or mindless, it all had a build up. Tying/tied in with the story in a way.

Honest, it's something you have to read in one sitting or else you might go insane from self-suspense. With the plot being as it is!

Ah sorry, almost turned into a reveiw.

I want to know what happened! This is my favorite story so far from anything I've read within and outside Literotica. I literally feel like crying and I cant wait for the rest of the story. You should turn this into a book. <3

Excellent reading! Your plot is superb, the execution is elegant and there is nothing wasted or wanting. Thank you for such a vastly entertaining story. A very well thought out novel

Needs proof reading for spelling and such but only minor.

This was entertainment. Thank you.

Masterfully done throughout! Thank you for sharing this with us!

I am saddened that there is nothing more for me to read. I have so many questions that I would love answered. This would make an amazing book!

Is that the end!?!?

You’re going to end the story here!!! Auuugh! 5-Stars

You guys, click the authors name at the top by the title, that will bring up all their work. This story has a (great!) 3 part follow-up!

I am so impressed and now hooked on this story, can't wait for the next installment

Stayed for the story.

I cared for the characters. Good job Noble_Truth!

And good twist for the sister. I did think it was going to be her mother.

I really loved this story and the characters. It’s so good!

I really liked the story and I look foward to reading the follow ups.

I only have 1 question; if the demons are most vulnerable under sunlight, why would the angels attack them during the night? It qould be an easy win for them to go and fight demons during the day.

A perfect blend of erotica with story telling. Like many others, I came to come and come to stay.

You are obviously a talented storyteller... But im sorry... The idea of slavery repulses me... I wasnt in the least turned on by her enslavement forced sex... And the idea of enslavement forever was disgusting... This story really bothered me... Reading it i wanted nothing more than to see devnik destroyed... He was a monster in every sense of the word... But you portrayed him as some kind of hero... As always jmo

-jaye-

I loved it and can’t wait to read the next chapters. To previous ‘anonymous’ complaining about the slave aspect…what did you expect to find in the mind control category?

I've been reading on Literotica for close to 7 years now and I CANNOT believe I am only finding you now. Amazing story and amazing talent and skill as a writer.

Love how he is slowly turning good because of her, and she’s learning to love him and being under his control.