- Romance
- Demons Slain
- Page 6
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"It was Millie!" Alison shouted.
Danny smiled. "I have known Greg a long time and having met Millie I am certain that the Gods have finally managed to put two people together in perfect harmony. Now as a long term Star Trek fan I will reiterate the immortal words of Captain Spock and say to you Millie and Greg, 'live long and prosper'. I know you will." He lifted his hand and executed a perfect Vulcan peace sign. He then found an unbroken glass and lifting it, he offered the Toast. "Greg and Millie."
Whilst he had been speaking Millie had made her way over to me and when he finished we were standing with our arms around each other's waist as everyone raised their glasses. "Greg and Millie."
THE END
Please do not write and tell me I spelt impediment incorrectly. I misspelt the word deliberately as this was a drunken man speaking who was not in total control of his mouth.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 years agoThis is better but doesn't completely wash away my distaste for the abrupt ending in "Demons to Slay". I agree that the author has every right to conclude a story in any way they choose. However the abruptness of the ending was my main dislike. I was not happy to see that in 3 short paragraphs the author demolished his whole story. As to rewriting the story, I would rather that he added an ending where Angela's husband died and she came to Greg for comfort. Still has the tragedy, adds another tragedy, but ends with two people together as a romance should.
Richard1940over 2 years agoI've just read "Demons to Slay" and am glad I read the stories in that order. I commented then that the author had right to select any ending he liked. This ending is fine but leaves the story as much like many others, the former is memorable for being so unexpected.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoWell it seems ages ago that I read the 1st version; I have to say that at the end I was fit to choke you!!
I know I scored it a 3* - I was so disappointed! But this version runs much smoother and a 5* is absolutely no problem,
VBR
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steeltiger01almost 5 years agoYou've given us no less of a story than the first version; a less heart-rending ending, but certainly still a worthy successor to the original.
Thank you for sharing your talents with us.
