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"Yes, My lord. Anything else Your Highness?" the meek boy said. In answer, Topain turned sharply from the stable, pulling Linaross toward the castle. She cast a glance back at the poor boy and turned to admonish Topain. But he cut her off by scowling at everyone they met, including their parents. All she did was gape at him, pain keeping her silent. It was as though the Topain in the forest clearing couldn't be with her in the palace. She knew that was for her own protection, but it still hurt. Inwardly, she ached to have him treat everyone with respect and kindness.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 15 years agoThis is a wonderful beginning to a great story! Those negative comments are from such idiotical people!
Anonymousover 17 years agoThat aside, this was one of the worst stories I've read today. The dialogue was shallow, the characters transparent and the story itself lacked substance and focus.
Anonymousover 17 years agoThis is not an incestuous story, not in real terms.
Poorly written, sketchy characterisation without a strong story thread.
