All Comments on 'Eliminating the Competition'

Good 4 star story. The usurper got what he deserved, but Paul isn't home and dry.

She met the guy just a couple of weeks earlier while shopping in the mall. We have no details of her following up on that by going on dates etc (and we're told she couldn't hide anything from Paul anyway) so her contacts with Raul were during her 4 big box buys at the store.

Then at the end of that short time she's in his bed because she loves him as well as loving her husband! Since when was love a free ticket to sex? She never thought to ask herself if Raul was simply getting a free fuck from a married woman. Oh, of course, I forgot, she was conflicted. Not conflicted enough to step back and think it through. No, she only 'fessed up after being in his bed.

Paul has a problem on his hands for all future time.

The problem with women today is that they think they are entitled to something that they are not!

Simple, well written answer to a classic LW theme. When she figures it out, did a little shiver of fear crawl up her spine? Nicely done. Thank you.

cute but I wouldn't keep her. No way. I would have said good bye! Enjoy Raul.

Terrible.... Why keep a known cheater.... Idiot MC

the story was fine but ... why Paul and Raul? seems to me there are a lot of names not all ending in aul.

Good read.

Great story! So should all wife stealers end, face down in the dirt!

This is not in the least believable, a truly pathetic MC and ridiculous ending don't help.

Just another wimpy cuckold

Although he took care of sluts cheating partner he was weak with slut. She had just came home from screwing another and he can't live without her?!

Idiota do kwadratu. Kolejny masochista. Co ludzie mają w głowach , smieci.