Fallen Ch. 17

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Nephylim
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"One day a friend's mother bought me some paints and a canvas and I painted a picture. It was beautiful. I know I shouldn't brag but it completely swept me away. It was beautiful, stunning. It made me feel excited and hopeful and... all sorts of things I couldn't put into words. But it wasn't a painting to be left around where my father could see it. Of course, he did see it and he went completely crazy. He smashed the canvas across my back and beat me until I was unconscious.

"When I came to the house was full of smoke. It was on fire and I was trapped. I think I must have been hallucinating from smoke inhalation, because I saw a figure in the smoke, just the outline of a person with a red light all around them, misty and unclear. It took my hand and led me through the smoke and flames and somehow I got out.

"Once I hit the air I passed out and when I came round again I was in hospital. My father died in the fire. Because I was still only sixteen they tried to put me in a children's home but I wasn't having any of that and I ran away. I've been running ever since."

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CasualnagaCasualnagaover 2 years ago

What causes parents to turn into such creatures?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Wow

You must have the greatest imagination ever. To have written something like this. It blows me away. Thank you keep up the good work!

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66about 12 years ago
I agree

Absolutely brilliant I am so glad they are together onto the next....

dinkybootsdinkybootsabout 12 years ago
brillaint

more more more... post it soon.

Bird_Man_RNBird_Man_RNabout 12 years ago
Another great chapter...

but as always, too short...lol!! I love it, please keep going.

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