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Ignoring the lies and cheating and betrayal - the lack of integrity of even mr g - who would likely have gone ballistic if it was his wife "learning" and having fantasy fulfillment - it is a great story well delivered.
Ooops - we do have to ignore the foundation of the story though - it Holly was the neighbors daughter with no boy friend and Ashley her BFF and unmarried it would get all kudos - as good a the story is it is still about cheaters so the 5 stars are for the intesity of the story and the way it is presented not what they did LOLmore...
Although I love spas, hot tubs and swimming in pools, but have developed an allergy to them & can't partake anymore. I've tried anti- chlorine bodywash but nothing works. In terms of the story, there was some flagrant cheating, yet there were mitigating circumstances.
1) the boyfriend and husband were selfish/ inhibited lovers. If you don't go down on your woman, expecting her not to cheat is about as realistic as a pawnshop leaving it's doors open and unlocked at at night. 2) the narrator was older and not a viable threat to steal the women. This was pretty much his last hurrah.
3) the narrator had a vasectomy. Bastard kids are a dealbreaker. that rationalization aside, had they been found out - the mind boggles. Good story about how regular people who can get pretty shady, if the right set of circumstances are in place.more...
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