by pseudonym2005
An an slurry disgusting drivel of unfaithful whores! Written by a writer who seems to be a product of a whores whoring!
I find it difficult to understand the mentality of a writer couple who can actually write and justify this in their minds!! This was a load of crap with nil Justification. The title is as misleading as tits on a boar!
I sincerely hope that the fact that u both haven’t written in a long time is because both of u have succumbed to a sexual disease like aids based on ur values and whoring around !!!Good riddance to baaaad rubbish. And yes ...the last message by you two just showed how ur beliefs have ensured personal issues! Those who live by infidelity get fucked in life by infidelity or STD!
Well written valueless fluff. I like a lot of your stories, this one is a stinker. Horrible people doing dishonorable things, contrary to the title.
Well...
That was... a well-written piece of garbage?
The writing is top notch, the plot sucks, the characters are despicable.
So much talent being used simply to troll the LW readership with this plot is a waste of something precious and valuable. The author may well have learned karma does not find such sacrilege to be amusing.
Hahahahaa these fkin comments man. I was about to roast this story too, but then I just read the comments and I don’t even feel bad anymore