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"Now what should you do?"
"Make us coffee?"
"That too, but you should print out your articles as dispatched and match each one against the edited version. You may not agree with every change but even so attempt to determine why such a change was made - more likely than not it is simply related to house style or the subeditor's preference. Many other editing changes, however, may prove to be eye-openers and useful for your learning curve. Actually you did very well - my impression of your submitted copy was that it would be a breeze to sub, even with the re-writing. You write with reasonable word economy, display a good grasp of language and your wordage is crisp and clear. There clearly is a writer inside you."
Kirsty sat in her chair for a minute after Merrick had turned away and started working on his accounts. She was flushed with pleasure. She was determined to work very hard to earn more genuine accolades from him.
To Be Continued...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 2 years agoGet your story straight. It is stated that Merrick is the eldest child and rules the roost. In the next paragraph he dates his sister’s friends who are six years older and they see him as the kid brother.
Why was the last “moll” allowed to marry & start a family, yet not Kirsty?
zoltantheduckover 17 years agoThat's why you leave another copy with several law firms with instructions to be opened and acted on if anything unexpected happens to you.
Another humourous and well crafted chapter from the man from the land of the long white fleece.
Anonymousover 17 years agoreally is an enthralling tale,however I could not imagine Spiro as a gentleman of honour,who would keep his word.
