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Click hereLike they say. Paybacks a bitch.
We luckily found a small diner that was open a few miles away, gorged ourselves, famished from our early morning romp. When we finished doing that and came back out again, the sun was shining bright, the day promising and beautiful, as where the two women who held each of my hands as we walked outside.
"Take the top down," I told Cynthia, which she happily agreed with, though somewhat confused and taken aback when I climbed into the back seat rather than in front. Figuring I meant for Joy to sit up front with her, she began doing so.
"Where do you think you're going?" I told her, already unzipping my pants in the back seat. "You're with me," I said grinning at her. "It'll be your turn to drive on the way back."
Cynthia burst out laughing, started the car, and pulled out of the lot, heading up the coast, enjoying the bright warm sunshine, and the occasional glance back at us in the mirror. I sat with a smile on my face, enjoying the curious looks from people passing us, or who we passed, as I sat curiously behind the driver. Joy, her head down in my lap, softly, and tantalizingly sucking me for several miles along the coast. They soon exchanged places as we headed back. Pulling into the drive, I then got out, stood there with my cock sticking out looking at the two of them.
"Ok ladies, on your knees...time to finish what you both started here."
They looked at one another, laughed...giggled and then knelt down in front of me side-by-side. Even the passing cars, one or two slowing as they drove by, one even honking and waving at us didn't deter me from standing there the way I was. Two lovely, affectionate...and somewhat crazy women, more than happy to kneel there in broad daylight, sucking and fondling my dick together.
I came copiously, pouring out my pleasure all over the two of them.
It was only the beginning...
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- COMMENTS
RanDog025about 6 years agoTHANKFULLY YOU WEREN'T. WELL, I'D LOVE TO TELL YOU HOW GOOD IT WAS AND HOW I WISH THIS AND THAT BUT IT'S BEEN TO MANY YEARS SINCE YOU'VE BEEN ACTIVE. WHETHER OF NOT YOU FULLY RECOVERED FROM A SURGERY OR WHATEVER. YOU QUIT OR ARE UNDER ANOTHER NAME, I KNOW THAT WHEN I GET DONE READING ALL YOUR STORIES I'M GOING TO BE LOST ONCE AGAIN. SURE WISH I'D KNOWN YOU. HOPE AND WISH YOU ALL THE LUCK AND HAPPINESS POSSIBLE. PEACE BROTHER MANY FEATHERS!
PFDIIalmost 11 years agoThis story was good enough that you get lost in the plot and tend to ignore the sex .....at least a little bit.
This is a great story. All who read it will owe you a debt of gratitude.
Thanks !
surrenderme72almost 13 years agoOnce again very creative and well written. A little far-fetched but what the hell it was a lot of fun. Loved the anal scene.
Jazzin59almost 14 years agoI, like a previous reader, have just read all five chapters in succession. I will be curious to how your story is turned in to a movie. Will they leave the female roles mother and daughter, or will they change them to long time lovers? With that said I totally enjoyed your story.
Many Feathersalmost 14 years agoAuthorBut before I say why...let me first say thank you to everyone who has commented, or sent me an email regarding this series. And though some haven't liked it, or found it even boring? (OK...) the majority of you have expressed to me just how much you have enjoyed it, and wished for it to continue. Perhaps...in another direction, other vein or train of thought here. We'll think about it...so maybe. But...having said that, here's the don't laugh part.
I've actually been (seriously) approached by someone who actually wants to turn this into a full length feature erotic movie (remember those?) Someone who is serious and has the means to actually make it happen. I'm keeping my fingers crossed here, but even as we speak (or I write rather) we're discussing it, what it will take...cast, setting, editing...screen play, the whole nine yards. So who knows folks...maybe this will actually happen. Unfortunately, IF it does, I'll have to pull this series from the site as someone else will soon own the copy-rights to it.
So get it while you can.
But again...thanks to everyone for the constructive critisims as well as for the favorable comments this story has received.
I remain...
Very appreciative to one and all.
marklionalmost 14 years agoManny I read all five chapters today from start to finish. I love the way you develop the characters in this series. I hope you continue with this series and write a follow-up on how they get along in time. I like how Cynthia and Joy took advantage of Jack and teased him to death before they finally gave in. I would love to be in Jack's shoes with those two women every night. Keep up the good work. Marklion
risler1987almost 14 years agoYou've hit another homerun, old friend. You're so consistently good I wonder if I'd be disappointed if you ever write something that's not better than ALMOST everyone else. Again I thank you for the wonderful entertainment.
