All Comments on 'Giving My Little Sister a Massage'

But in the end it was worth the trip.

A nice ending and the whole story was erotic.

Thanks for the read

I always look forward to contributions from you and am never disappointed.

I agree with the comment about lay, laid and laying, but, sadly, many others on this site also seem to have difficulties grasping the proper usage of these words.

Look forward to your next tale.

Learn the difference between lay, laid and laying. Too much rambling also. Not bad though.

You had a nice build to the story and didn't begin thge sex too soon. Part of the sister's behavior and speech is a bit implausible and not realistic. There were also a few goofs which a good editor would have corrected. It was very good but it could have been even better. Keep writing and use an editor!

...and for the love of mike please get an editor

Unique, restrained, and sexy!

anyone who did not get hot with this one is dead...great job...part 2 soon please

Talk about hitting the right buttons. Massage leading to a hot anal coupling, realistic expressions of emotions during the build up, and the climax. Best new story, any category, in a very long time on this site. Well done!

you have been here long enough to know better than to post a story without going through a good editor first. on the first page you change krissy's name to kim this STUPID goof ruins a story if you had proof read it and put it through a good editor first this would have been caught. get smart and delete this now and run through an editor then repost it and do it to all your stories

SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND ALWAYS USE A GOOD EDITOR BEFORE POSTING

DBRS

Great story, fantastic build up and great plot Keep this one as one of your best

Didn't need to read past the first cliche filled page to realize this wasn't worth finishing. Don't bother on this one

WOW. I have to take a deep breath after that one. Great build-up. Great story. I don't usually read a story over 2 pages. I couldn't stop reading this one. Great job.

OMG that was intense! The story was well told. The slow simmer had me boned up like I haven't been in a long time. Kudos to you for a great job. Uhhh. Now I have to go take of my own. Thanx a bunch for a great ride. I am adding U as a fav.