Would you like a hand? He'd gladly lend you his...
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Has potential
Story is great but
Mic feedback
Is terrible. Please re record and make me cum
Oh my
Despite the mic issues. Your story itself was fantastic. I would really like more like this one.
try it again :)
Like others have said, you will need either a better Mic with a filter or you should not steak so closely to the Mic. I did not personally enjoy the instruction, but that may be because of the static interference. I did enjoy how excited you got at the end. Keep trying til you find something that works. :)more...
sorry 1st attempt
trial and error
GOOD STORY - BAD MIC
I thought your story sounded like it'd be a good one, but it was so hard to hear becuz of everything your mic was picking up. (I had 2 turn my volume waaaay down cuz I couldn't stand the way it was picking up your breathing.)
However, I think you should make some adjustments to your mic and TRY AGAIN! Or even re-record THIS one with a better mic. ??? Just an idea.... I'd like to hear it w/better quality! :-)more...
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