All Comments on 'Hearts of Warriors Ch. 10'

Cant believe Demetri actually sobbed for another person n loved dem so much with d exception of Mara Caleb n Annie.........im totally lovein dis story..

xoxo

Aria

Rip my heart out why dont ya! When you got it you got it and You have got one hell of a talent! I'm gonna need a major kleenex run if Pietro dies! I really hope you find some way to get this published cause I will be among the first to buy your stories!

If you kill Pietro, I swear I will rip all your fingers off so you never kill another character. I'm gonna cry!!!!!!!! WHY DO YOU ALWAYS KILL THE AWESOME BACKUP CHARACTERS??????????

Favorite comments: You can't go all hearts and flowers on me right at the end. Save that shit. Made me bust out laughing.

But on a serious note I hope he makes it. :(.............. Next chapter

I am sobbing again!

Seriously i have a box of tissues next to me because i am crying so much.

I really pray Pietro doesnt die, Dimetri will be unstoppable if he does

In any action story, the secondary characters exist to be killed, often tragically.

They are called "Red Shirts", a trope from the early Star Trek scripts. I have little hope of Brandon's survival. As with Pietro, I am sure his death will be heroic.

Amazing as always. One question though. D says Joshua is 1000 years old. Then Joshua says he's an Ancient. How can that be?