All Comments on 'Heaven or Hell'

Poor theology, but a fun story.

I got to page 4 and had to stop, I just simply could not keep up with the storyline. One of the most confusing stories I ever read.

A stupid policeman who didn't know what a hoe Rhonda was!!! Good riddance to Rhonda

I like how anonymous wants to judge u then speak about christianity jm do not judge ut bretheren sayeth the lord. Another hypocrite christian has spoken. Mice jab bout obomacare loved it like i loved the story 5 stars from me..

OMG! That was fun! *****

Through 3/4 of the story, one of the most intriguing stories I've read on this site. The last part of the story just got too silly. It could have been so good if you had told how the memory of his wife slowly faded as the reality of the situation came clear and his love for Amanda and hers for you deepened. It almost seems like you got bored with your own story at the end. You shouldn't have - it was one of the best.

Made me smile, well written for a fun read, you have done a good job with the plot line and characters

That dumb tramp thought that he'd want his new virginal wife to inherit her Hoeness? Read the room bitch, I know she's desperate and all but take that Hoe shit back to hell with you.Also St Peter stop being so easily manipulated.

Story went off the rails. Odd stuff at the end.

;-) A really fun read, thanks!

Strange odd amusing little vignette with a moral to it. Worth a read even with the strange bits 😆. BardnotBard

Well that went off the rails at the end. If a person believes in heaven and hell, then condemning someone you used to love to hell is about the worst thing one can do. Of course it can also be taken as symbolic as his brain is working things out.

it's so hard to ask to be forgiven. I fell for me it is because somehow, through my otherwise innocent adaptation of my own bullshit's story of a lovable, huggable. knit wit- victim. I fail to truly understand just what I am asking it for, but..... "I'm not afraid of the dark, I just can't see. i'm not afraid to go out at night or go away from my home. Cause I know that God IS WITH ME, AND I'M NEVER REALLY ALONE