All Comments on 'Her Best Friend's Daughter'

Damn, for your first time you completed a marveleous piece of work. Great build up, excellent flirting and the sex part very well done. Seems there could even be a few extra chapters of how she seduces the mother and keeps Mandy and Karen satisfied..

Keep writing as your work is very, very good.

A script from you should be very welcome on any porn set.

Scrub that, on any erotic movie set.

Need I say I enjoyed that very much.

If this is your first foray into this topic, I say bring it on...it was tender, erotic, realistic and bold and brash at the same time...you built to a strong climax (pun intended) well and yet left us wanting more. Please keep going

It was well worth the time to read good build up and excellent ending good job thank you

I want someone to lick my pussy like that......mmmmmmmmmmmmmm

HOT!!!!

This was very sexy...loved it!

I definitely would love if you started writing a serie in the lesbian category.

You could teach a lot!

You have done a very good job of writing this. The foot caught in a string getting the protagonist caught was well played story telling. I have very much enjoyed your writing style. Do you actually suffer ridicule about not writing for a slow build up reader following?

How would a young woman with a crush on another young woman react over the weekend of her initial Sapphic seduction?

Would she ask the woman she has trusted for years to help her seduce her high school chum?