Homelands Pt. 05 Ch. 06

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Nina snorted derisively.

Her brother glowered at her before continuing. "Phil was a dangerous man. If I'd gone at him alone, there was a very real chance that I would've been the one to end up dead."

Annie felt like she could hardly breathe.

Not because she felt betrayed, though. Rather, because she didn't. And that made her think that she was betraying her family.

"Can you forgive me?" he asked.

By way of response, Annie went up on her tiptoes, wrapped her arms around her father's shoulders, and kissed him the way good daughters should kiss their fathers. Softly, at first, but with increasing passion. Their lips and tongues began to dance sensuously with one another and she felt both his Libido and his fat dick swell in response.

Nina catcalled and slapped Annie's ass playfully.

Not long after that, they headed up to the master bedroom.

If Annie felt any guilt about reacting the way she had to her father's confession, the mind-blowing threesome she had with him and his sister long into the night would have easily laid it to rest. Sex that good made it easy to overlook what he'd done, and would allow her to forgive a whole lot worse.

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jdnunyerjdnunyeralmost 12 years agoAuthor

Hey, anon. Thanks for all the comments and for the kind words. Sorry I didn't respond earlier. I've been busy the past couple days.

You've raised a lot of excellent points. Looking back, I wish I'd done a few things a bit differently. But I'd also say that you might change your mind about some of the characters after Part Six... :)

Speaking of which, I'm not much more than halfway done with the first draft of Part Six, so it's going to be a while before any more chapters get posted. Probably around the end of September, unfortunately. But hopefully it will be worth the wait.

JD

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
liked it

i always feel a little hollow when i come to the end of a good read

1st i called it. hank i never trusted, iva might be fooling me but not hank

2nd .eric didn't evolve like frank did maybe it was that he never lost,he heedlessly charged and it was Wes who died. kurt new he made mistakes eric not so much

3rd annie seems ....insignificant ironic since that's exactly how she feels about herself and what drove her into daddy's arms

4rth is it weird that i think the orwins relationship is healthier then the moodys they seem less screwed up.

good monolog though about happy endings, good guys, wicked stepmothers, and fairy tales...because as we all know fairy tales are for children, and children don't last in the homelands

i hope to see another chapter soon (keep the quality though) i know how hard it is to stay inspired with only goofy internet praise as sustenance

jdnunyerjdnunyeralmost 12 years agoAuthor

You're quite welcome, anon. And thank you for the compliment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Very, very good story.

I thought days of cumming twice in a row were just a fond memory for me but you proved me wrong.

Thank you.

jdnunyerjdnunyeralmost 12 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the comments, Rifleman and Einar. I'm glad Eric's evolution as a character and his appreciation of his mother come across. Who needs the throne indeed, Einar.

I have begun work on Part Six already, Rifleman. But I've still got a ways to go. It's possible that it'll be posted some time in August, but it may not be until September.

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