All Comments on 'How To Make Characters Talk in Your Stories'

Well done.

Very informative.

Kudos!

I wish I could have found these lessons back in my high school days. Very effective and fun :)

In particular, the "Paragraphing Dialogue" part is something I managed to escape university without understanding.

Thank's so much! I needed alot of help in this area and hopefully I can remeber some it. I think the biggest lesson I learned with my grammar is to rely on my first instinct. I always change were I put comma's and quotation marks because I think i'm doing it wrong. But what I learned is that I usually get it right the first time. I write it. And even when I don't my first corrections are usually the right corrections.

This dialogue instruction was extremely helpful. (And this is the first grammar lesson that made me laugh out loud.)

I have always been good at English. But, never really good at punctuation. This has helped me tremendously. Hopefully, Literotica will enjoy my next story; with all the information that you taught me.

Rita sighed as she wrote back,"Guess I should have payed more attention in class."

You must be an excellent English teacher. Your explanations are efficient and effective. How you manage to make the essay erotic ("I always swallow cum") is a tribute to your ability to cross stereotype. I professionally write as an attorney, but not dialogue. This was extremely useful. Thanks.

"Well," I sighed. "It's odd that I had to learn about writing dialogues from an erotica site."

"My English teacher would have a heart attack," I continued, "if I told him where I learned to write. I could give him the link. It'd definitely improve his skills, and who knows, I might even get to fuck him!"

Did I get it right, Miss?

"Thank you so much! You've taken the mystery out of dialogue," she gushed with awe. ;)

(god I hope I got that right! LOL)

Thanks for the review.. I wish I had had these sentences to correct in high school, maybe I would have gotten a higher score!!!!!

Thanks so much for the lesson! I want to write better and this helped me remember the english lessons I thought I would never need to know! Funny how that comes 360. I actually enjoy writting now :D

Laura

"Great lesson in grammar," she said.