How to Tame a Dragon Ch. 08

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"See you in a bit Jess!" Izzy called over her shoulder as Daniel led her away.

Daniel held her hand as they walked in silence. At one point they stopped to watch the waves, and as he put his arm across her shoulders, Izzy felt that this was probably the most romantic thing to have ever happened to her.

She gave a happy little sigh, and looked up at him with a big grin on her face. "Isn't this just marvellous?" she laughed.

He grinned down at her, thinking that anything would be marvellous with Izzy by his side. He leaned down to capture her lips with his, and she melted into him, her hands coming up to rest on his shoulders.

Their kiss began slow and languid, but turned into a heated passion very quickly.

The water lapping at their feet brought them back to reality.

"It's always something!" Daniel grumbled softly. He looked at Izzy with a wry smile. "I never thought that the day would come, when kissing a girl would be constantly interrupted by weather events!"

Izzy giggled and reached up to kiss him once on the mouth. "One day we'll get it right!" she promised him.

"Yes indeed Izzy... we will. And then you need to watch out."

The look he gave her set her heart beating erratically, and the blood rushing through her veins at a terrific rate. She prudently kept her mouth closed and didn't let the, 'oh Daniel' slip out.

He took her hand, and they walked the length of the beach at a great pace. By the time that they turned around to head back to the restaurant, Izzy felt like she had just run a marathon.

"Heavens – I'm out of condition!" she panted, as they arrived back.

Daniel looked down at her flushed damp face, and heaving chest. "Was I walking too fast for you?" he frowned in concern. "Why didn't you tell me to slow down?"

"I needed to push myself, and you weren't walking that fast." She smiled her reassurance. "If I could do something like this once or twice a week, I'd get fit really quick."

"Now that the evenings are starting to draw out, maybe you could take a walk around my gardens. They are fairly extensive and if you were to do a brisk walk for half an hour every day, that would build up you stamina very effectively."

The rest of the day went in a blur for Izzy, as they sat around chatting before and after they were joined by Jessie and Richard; and all too soon it was time for them to make their way home.

Daniel easily kept ahead of Richard, and they arrived back quite a bit before them. He pulled up outside of her little house, and walked her to her front door. "This is probably the last chance I'll get to do this for a couple of days..." he told her as he pulled her into his arms to kiss her passionately, and his hands moved down her body in an almost frenzied exploration.

"Daniel!" Izzy gasped her head going back as he nuzzled at her throat.

He pulled back his eyes flaring. "I want you Izzy," he growled at her. "I want you so much – that it's killing me."

The intensity of his look silenced her completely; she was totally inexperienced at dealing with a man filled with that kind of passion. She didn't know what to say or do...

"Richard and Jess will be back at any minute, so I am going to get the hell out of here, before I do something really stupid!" he ground out savagely as he spun on his heel and walked back up the drive.

Izzy stood watching as he climbed back into his car and moved it to behind the big house, where his garages were. She let herself into her little home then, and locked the door with a little shiver. She knew that it was only a matter of time before she and Daniel became lovers...

She just hoped that he would realise that she had never been with a man before, because she didn't know how to tell him.

The next day she spent with Jess. They pottered around her little house and took a walk around Daniel's gardens.

Richard and Daniel stayed away from them for the entire morning, and Izzy wondered if Jess had told Richard to keep his distance. As the day wore on and Jessie enthused about absolutely everything, Izzy became convinced that Jess was just biding her time before leaping on Izzy, to persuade her about something.

She was also certain that it would be something that she wouldn't like.

They sat down at her kitchen table to eat sandwiches, and share a pot of tea between them.

"Okay then Jess, spit it out," Izzy challenged suddenly.

Jessie gave her a slightly guilty look. "Have I been that obvious?" she asked not meeting Izzy's eye. "You need to come home." Jessie finally said in a rush.

"I beg your pardon?" Izzy tensed

"There's this job come up at Briskell's you know the biscuit factory?" Jessie looked questioningly at her.

"I know of it... yes," Izzy acknowledged noncommittally.

"Well they've got this vacancy come up in administration. It would be absolutely perfect for you."

"I'm not an administrator," Izzy said flatly.

"And you remember Cousin Andrew's friend Robert?"

Izzy just nodded.

"Well he's come to stay with Andrew for a couple of weeks, maybe longer. I remember that you used to have a real thing about him..." Jessie grinned encouragingly at her. "Any way he was asking about you the other day... Really wanted to know where you were and what you were doing, and..." she paused dramatically. "He asked if you were still single!"

Izzy sat waiting for the rush of excitement that she should have felt... nothing.

"Come on Izz!" Jessie prompted, "I know that you really liked him a lot."

"I was just a child Jess," Izzy said quietly, she narrowed her eyes slightly. "And he always enjoyed the ego trip; that my blind adoration sent him on."

"Yes, but like you said you were just a child; and you're not any more... Why don't you come and see him, spend some time with him? See if it can develop into something... more."

"I am not going to turn my back on everything that I've managed to build up here; just on the off chance!" Izzy protested.

"Okay okay!" Jessie tried to pacify. "But that's not the only reason that I came up this weekend..." again she paused for dramatic effect.

"Oh?"

"Richard and I just got engaged," she said demurely before looking up with a huge grin.

"Jess! That's wonderful!" Izzy exclaimed joyfully, she rushed around the table to hug her sister.

Jessie laughed. "Yes it is... rather," she said with a watery little laugh. "Any way..." she carried on a little bit more firmly. "We're having a bit of an engagement bash next Saturday, and you of course simply have to come."

Izzy tensed. "Where?" she asked suspiciously.

"Why, back home of course," Jessie said innocently. "It's got to be local enough for all the family to be able to attend."

"Sorry Jess," Izzy said apologetically. "I'm not sure how I'm going to get down there for the evening."

"It's all arranged!" Jessie said a little smugly. "While you were getting dressed yesterday morning, we told Daniel... and he said that he would drive you down; with him and bring you back afterwards."

"I'd love to come!" Izzy said her whole body trembling slightly in anticipation of an evening with Daniel as her escort.

"Excellent!" Jessie exclaimed. "Now then what shall we do this afternoon?" Jessie asked having gotten the important bits out of the way.

Izzy shrugged. "I've absolutely no idea," she admitted.

Jessie didn't answer her directly; instead she took out her mobile and called Richard.

"Hi, I've told her about the party; and she's agreed to come, she's really excited about it!" Jessie paused to listen for a moment. "Yep, I told her all about him..." again a pause. "Any way we're at a loose end now, and so we thought that we would come and invade Daniel's..." another pause. "See you in a bit!"

She closed her phone and put it away and then turned to look at Izzy.

"Shall we go then?" she asked.

Izzy tried to play it cool, but it was all she could do not to snatch up her jacket and run over to Daniel.

They walked together up to the main house, and Richard stood waiting at the door.

"Congratulations Richard!" Izzy smiled up at him.

She walked into the hall to find Daniel standing there with a face like thunder...

And that furious glare seemed to be aimed directly at her!

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Horseman68Horseman68over 5 years ago
The Green-Eyed Monster Emerges.

Beware big jealous men of passion, Izzy. We tend to break things and people with some abandon that come between us and those for which we care.

tompo296tompo296about 8 years ago
Re- Aston Martin

I'm sorry to be so picky but an 'Aston Martin' cannot be referred to as a "small sports car"

I am loving your story though :)

AmandaSilverAmandaSilverover 11 years ago
High literature it's not, but...

not everything has to be. Sometimes reading is just about escape. And erotica comes in a variety of styles. I enjoy that this is a light read that lets me escape reality for a little while. If I didn't like it, I wouldn't read it. You definitely have talent. And this is by far NOT one of the truly horrid pieces of writing that somehow end up on here; you're able to tell a coherent story and develop some great images.

Of course there's always room for improvement, but criticism should be constructive, offering suggests that will help improve future writing. In fact, one of the biggest issues I find in your writing is your use of commas and semi-colons; they seem to be placed in some odd places that make the reading feel more choppy than it should. However, you've got talent. Keep working at it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
A broken reccord

You just rins and repeat. "his lips came down on hers" time and time again. It gets old. This story is shallow, like someone else said, a Harlequin novel, and I dont say that as a compliment. It makes no sense, the characters are not developed. The story is nonexistant, and frankly: boring. The girl, Izzy, acts as if she is a female of Victorian England, but at some point she wore jeans??! The entire story would fit better in the victorian era.

I am sorry, you are not a writer, find something else to do with your time.

The people that buys Harlequin novels will most likely dissagree. But harlequin novels arent litterature, its crap.

Harsh, but sincere.

partial2passionpartial2passionalmost 12 years ago
Hmm

Stumbled upon this nice story and am delighted. I like this story and the characters. I feel that you had a strong begginging but I wish it had that extra umfh.

When she finally mentions her sickness it seems that pneumonia is not as convincing. Maybe it would more compelling with a more severe illness. Or maybe its not that... you keep mentioning how weak and sick she was but maybe a flashback on how she felt while at her worst would make it more interesting.

And its obvious she's a virgin but she keeps acting like she doesn't know anything about anything and is afraid... so maybe as comments below, you can relate the reason why she is this way... maybe previous abuse?

Also Daniel's rough demeanor and overly sexualized behavior seems a little over the top. I love an Alpha man but he doesn't seem to be all there.

You mention in alot of unnecessary detail how they eat breakfast lunch dinner...drink coffee, tea (they drink A LOT of coffee) how she takes a bath, etc. But you don't really further the story along. So I would just try to move the story along towards a climax.

But other than that really nice story! And I look forward to reading more.

jamac1024jamac1024almost 12 years ago

i think this was written in the style of harlequin romance circa 1980s...i've read those stories and believe me, if you found this story to be drawn out, you'd likely not last one book in that series...it's a long drawn out process of storytelling and then boom! the happily-ever-after ending suddenly happens and it's the last page of the book...yep harlequin romance style of writing!

NekoNekoNekoNekoalmost 12 years ago
Hrm...

Something Sidney43 said triggered a thought process in my head...

You have not given us any indication that Izzy has ever been abused, but the way that you are portraying her to be confident in everything except dealing with a man (especially when you keep telling us how protective her sister is of her and how ready Jess is to charge in and kill for her) makes one think that she *has* actually been abused and/or raped and that she is petrified of men/sex for some reason.

Also, I just realised as I was writing this, that you have not told us Izzy's proper name- Isabel or Isabella or Isabelle - which Daniel can use to his own advantahe and give her a nickname of his own.

Speaking of nicknames, I found the scene where Izzy mentioned calling Daniel Dan or Danny very confusing, did he like her calling him by one of those names or did he find it annoying and then in retaliation move his leg against hers to freak her out?

kitty5670kitty5670almost 12 years ago
Boring?

Not hardly. This is wonderful. A breath of fresh air. Two people walking through the maze of life, trials, trouble, anger & romance. It's perfect.

VeraLynnfanVeraLynnfanalmost 12 years ago
Great storytelling

I have to add my name to the list of those who think that Totallyatease (now, where would one put the spaces if that was to become three words?) has a great talent for telling a story. So much so that one forgives the occasional spelling or punctuational mistake and comments on those privately rather than hanging her out to dry in these public comments.

Since she is obviously still working on this one, I'm going to use the time waiting for the next chapter by taking a look at her other work on here. Presumably she only works on one story at a time, so the others must be complete.

Sidney43Sidney43almost 12 years ago

I have to agree that the inevitable is being dragged out a bit too long. For crying out loud, if she is a virgin have a talk with Daniel, she is acting like she is a bit mentally impaired and we know she isn't. It is obvious they are attracted to each other, so try and act like adults and communicate. Daniel acts like he is some oversized teenager with raging hormones and Izzy acts like she is thirteen or thereabouts. Couldn't she at least told her sister she was interested in Daniel and to just leave her social life alone???

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