All Comments on 'I Just Didn't Want To Hear It'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Arrogant

What a self opinionated,selfish arsehole Steve is.Sandy should have told him it is the bike or her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Selfopinionated

What a self arsehole hole Steve is.Sandy should have told him,the bike or her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
NFW!

Me, I'd of packed my stuff and left town. Playing games is for suckers, and they were both playing games, especially her.

OPrimeOPrimeabout 6 years ago
She was an Ass

If she had not been such a bitch she could have worked it out with her husband.

She had to go to some guy at a dealership to start the process of riding. BS

tazz317tazz317about 6 years ago
GETTING IN THE WIND

the bikers mantra and dreams, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Not realistic

Understand conflicting interests between husband and wife. That's real.

But full on, open-mouthed kisses with another woman? Even if it was for play, that behavior crossed the line. Would he have tolerated his wife doing that - or maybe even more, then saying it was just to create an illusion and meant nothing? Nope.

Then having sex with her when he suspects her of actively (every Saturday) screwing another man? And chowing down on her during all this?!! Might as well be giving the other man head. That's what it amounts to.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Really, You write in English? You right in English.

"Grate" "write" up until the end. The road is what you ride on. Yesterday, you rode to work on the road. But what the hey. I'm only 5 years late in finding your stuff. Mostly very good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Get

Get real.After the first two months of choosing his bike rides over her,she would have kicked him out of the house and quite rightly so.He is nothing but a self opinionated,selfish arsehole.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Dumb asses all around

Motorcycle deaths go up every year in the US. In 2016 they accounted for over 18% of the deaths in road accidents. Riding a bike is like waving a red flag in front of a bull. You weight 180 lbs and the bull weighs over 2000 lbs. You weight maybe 500 lbs on a motorcycle and even a small car outweighs you by a ton. They touch you, you die. In most cases drivers don't even see the motorcycle they squash. It takes a real moron to ride a motorcycle in today's traffic. And this guy was a moron of epic proportions. His wife should have divorced his dumbass and moved on. Ugly story about stupid characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Who is "I" and what didnt they want to hear?

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dark2donut2dark2donut2over 5 years ago
The wife should have dumped the guy

When one wastes 401k money on nonsense like that and keeps on disregarding his rational spouse while flirting with another woman the wife had every right to dump the immature idiot.

Yet another redneck story from a redneck point of view.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good story.

Riding a bike is an exhilarating experience, which non-bikers cannot understand. The wife sensibly makes the effort to learn to ride and ends up totally enjoying it. What better ending could one expect. 5*s.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Dumped

Sandy would have dumped him.It was obvious he thought more of the bike than his wife.Going to work on it is fine but to put it before his wife on a weekend is totally selfish.

GrimmerGrimmerabout 5 years ago
Nice read

Good plot. "You do what I allow and I'll do what I want". Glad she finally got her head out of her ass.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
nitpick

"the platoon leader would yell out 'rout step'" , nope it's "route step", as en route or Route 66. Rout is something(s) different altogether.

Schwanze1Schwanze1over 4 years ago
Uh no

First, this was his one big deal recreational joy and she said no. Bullshit. He's not her bitch. If the gender roles were reversed all you cucks and cunts would be talking out of the other side of your mouths.

Second, story is not close to plausible. Not a chance she turned her attitude around like that. Not true to the character he first created.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Duh

What did she pay the asshole with. Her body? With what she did that was new and different in bed I’ll bet she did. What shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Very Enjoyable

It is nice to see something that is different and original. Very well written. One of your best.

jimjam69jimjam69over 4 years ago
Good one!

I didn't see that coming. I was gonna tear Steve a new ass for picking his bike over Sandy but that became unnecessary after the real ending

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
When You Borrow

From your 401K that's money you never can get back and the losses just keep compounding. That's just one thing that shows he was a dumb ass. Taking Cindy to work on his bike, kissing her, the meals, making secret plans, spending all of this money behind his wife's back, he's lucky she was a lot better person than he was and didn't just dump his ass. If the roles were reversed Slir would have him thinking she was cheating and he'd be out the door. Now the thing about the surprise party and him not wanting one I do understand. Good story though he needed his ass kicked into his throat. Signed: BTW

jtwheelsjtwheelsabout 4 years ago
Agree with anonymous 3/25

Non loquitor

NitpicNitpicalmost 4 years ago
Unatural

Unatural story,because in the real world Sandy would have quiet rightly divorced him for choosing a bike over their marriage.

LoejtcLoejtcalmost 4 years ago
I Don't See Steve as Selfish or Unusual

I don't know how many readers are empty nesters or retired but my experience is couples with moderate incomes tend to splurge on things mainly because they have extra income and are either reliving their youth or realizing a long submerged fantasy.

Whether it's a classic Chevy or Jag, an ATV, bass or ski boat, etc.

Steve always had his classic sport car. Wanting to cruise on a bike is as normal as going fishing. Why are commenters getting on his case? Selfish? I don't see it.

Women do similar things. Pottery, painting, dance, Yoga, upscale dining, travel, etc.

No one would criticize Steve if he wanted a set of the best golf clubs available but because he wants a bike, he's selfish.

We only live once and spend a lot of time, money and energy raising families. When we get a chance to indulge ourselves, do it before it's too late.

He doesn't need Cindy's permission. He never tried to limit her activities. I viewed her as too controlling. She didn't want to join him but she wanted to stop him without any rational reason.

Good for Steve.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

you know i used to have a saterday contract ad a logistic's company and it was allmost a tradition that we whent to the macdonald's ad 12:00

one day the shiftleader collapsed something with the hart he was way overwaight so he and his wife who also neared the border of just plain fat agreed they were gona become healty again so the wife lost a lot of waight and yeah she actualy was a very atractive lady but he just kept on going to the mac with us on saterday's and drinking heavely

and there relations got very strained and at some point she starting cheating and she did leave him and yes i was knew them both pesanaly so i did kinda know what was going on in there marriage offcourse did not know evrything

but my point being that was the only time in my life i did not blame the cheating spouse i still think she proberly should have diforced him first but i could understand and did not blame her

that is untill i read this story

couze man the main character in this story is a real pompous sanctemonious doushebag

becouze his wife doesend go with his sudden change of life style he become's atagnastic towards his wife he just makes discioncion's on his own that he should of have talked with his wife about and started an emotional afair with an ather woman wich graduated in actual cheating with the kissing then he lied about the second kiss

if my wife would have acted like he did i would trow her out so fast her head would be spinning even stonger if my father would treat my mother like this i would break his fucking legs

i just had to get that of my chest couze i truly fucking dispise this main character

you did keep my captivated with this story tough i give you a 4 cant give a 5 becouze of the main character tough

sorry for my very bad grammer english is not my native tong and sadly i am just not that good in writhing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Epic! If I could only get my Tommy on a bike :(

NitpicNitpicover 2 years ago
If

If Sandy had any sense,she would have divorced him for his arrogant selfish behaviour,and not gotten a bike.That is just giving in to him,what will he want next,a threesome with Cindy?.

NitpicNitpicover 2 years ago
If

If Sandy had any sense ,she would have divorced him the first Saturday he chose the bike over her.He is arrogant and self-centred and by buying a bike,she is giving in to his will.What will he want next,a threesome with Cindy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Sandy couldn't have done that with husband?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Husband should divorce Sandy. She was probably riding Kenny while learning to ride from Kenny. If she really wanted to be involved with the husband's hobby she should have asked him. It would have been a great way to strengthen their relationship.

BSreaderBSreaderover 2 years ago
A stupid reason to break up a marriage

Talk about childish a really stupid thing to destroy a marriage over.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good story telling. The couple seem far too at easy seeing the other suffer and fear. I liked the surprise ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story and very well told. It does show how easily a small thing can drive a wedge between people in love, both being unwilling to give an inch could have ended their life together. A lesson to be learned there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Story would have been a little more racy if he had pounded on Kenny's door after she went in.

Schwanze1Schwanze1over 2 years ago

Changed her spots did she?

youngjason018youngjason018about 2 years ago

wish my misses would come for a ride

Rocky62Rocky62about 2 years ago

Cindy was lookin pretty damn good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Stupid story and yes she fucked the other guy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Nice one. Wonder how many other couples could benefit from sharing real fun?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The husband is a selfish asshole. The wife deserves a real man.

GuyfromShadesGuyfromShadesalmost 2 years ago

Very cute story. Love the couples communication, haha. Thanks for your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The husband was really dumb doing the stunt with Cindy without talking to his wife. Yes he messed up (partially) but he planted a bad seed. Then even in his own words he kept putting his foot in his mouth. And why the heck would he wait 3-4 weeks to confront her when having followed her? Yes it was all a lovely farce but the husband was being a jerk who then felt the sting of his own making when his wife was out, ironically while she was trying to fix the problem.

brian_scoobybrian_scoobyover 1 year ago

Nice… liked how this ended. No cheating just two people who love each other, getting their heads out of there asses and loving each other even more. Sweet! Thank-you

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

He’s a selfish asshole.

SeaChangerSeaChangerover 1 year ago

Harleys are loud, not like those Jap bikes. People know you are there.

Yeah. You lost me there.

In the cities Harleys can distub a few hundred families per minute, especially if they have straight pipe.

In the country, only a couple of dozen per minute. But the birds stop singing.

Glad to learn it keeps the anthropomorphic Harley straight pipe rider safe.

NitpicNitpicabout 1 year ago
Me

Me,I don't accept the ending.The way she thought about him getting hurt whilst out riding,there is no way she would join him.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

BULLSHIT

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The guy was an ass to his wife he first of bought the bike because he felt old, guess what you are old. Second he just brushes of Sandy fears, then buys a bike that he would only ride, which to me is saying to the wife not welcome. Also I would never let my wife ride on the back of another persons bike because first off if that person is not careful and crashes his wife could be hurt or worse.

Also when he said I well give up the bike if you give up dancing is a real asshole move. First off dancing is safe next to riding, second your bike I bet cost more the going dancing.

Also he was cheating just not with Cindy yet because sooner or later I think he would seeing how much of an ass he is. His affair is with with his bike, he put that hunk of scrap before the women who gave him kids cooks for him, cleans, and I bet cares for him.

Best ending would be for this Kenny was a lawyer, and he handed Steve divorce papers. Then Sandy could say here are free to do as you like enjoy the bike I hope it gives you what I used too. She then leaves.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Husband was an asshole going through a mid life crisis and didn't deserve his true loving wife. Was an entertaining farce but wow the husband was selfish and an asshole.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Husband was a jerk. Especially considering Sandy was a true loving wife. The husband doesn't deserve her. Ag least they sorted it out.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

To the snowflakes if you think he was an ass, well then you are cowardly cucks and should go suck of your bull. I read and felt the complete opposite to these squid simps, the truth is he was to wimpy. Women don't respect honorless cowards they cuck them, so as well as the MC needing to grow a pair, the wife's whole persona and attitude throughout the story, there is just no way she'd acquiesce to his hobby/therapy, she proudly displayed her modern womanhood traits of narcissism self-entitlement and zero accountability and I just couldn't see her being a caring and submissive wife and doing something so beautifully thoughtful for and to share with her husband.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Good story, but a little tame in the husband’s actions. For the husband sounding like a real man, he would not have let her supposed affair with Kenny for more than a day after see her go in to his house. Also just because Kenny was a large man would not have slowed hubby from confronting him, length of chain, baseball bat, or even a gun are all great equalizers for a real man to take care of business! And his wife is a real stupid idiot to keep this kind of secret from her husband. First he might of really have hurt or killed Kenny, not knowing would he was doing for his wife. Secondly his wife to use someone else to teach her to ride a bike was wrong too, hurting her husband’s feelings too..

HighBrowHighBrow9 months ago

If you’re motor crazy, you’ll love this.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I didn’t like the old husband thinking he was a young man again and going for the motor instead of his wife. You pulled it off with the wife joining in the “hobby”. Yeah, and I have known a couple of friends killed riding their bikes by cars hitting them.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I went through a similar journey….started with a Honda 305 Super Hawk, a few Kawasakis up to the Suzi GS 1100 - the fastest land vehicle sold from a dealer’s showroom…until two years later when Honda came out with the V4. I gave up the speed game and ended up with a Norton 850 Commando - rubber mounted twin 30 years before Harley copied their innovation. Oh - and I picked up a used Porsche 911 turbo so I could afford both. I don’t ride/drive either in the winter but summers are a blast!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Yeah, she should of dumped his stupid ass. She actually went out of the way for him, he used the family money no matter the consequences.

If she had done the same things he did, everything. He would of called her a faithless, selfish, cheating slut.

Double standards story.

Not a feminist but a stickler for equality. He's the cunt here.

Had the tables been reversed she would of been the cunt.

1 star.

Also fuck riders in general, i have yet to hear a bike that isn't loud as fuck, waking people up, scaring those caught unaware if they're passing by fast enough and yelling (through their bikes) at the world that they are some of the biggest assholes on earth.

Riders that choose rides that are not loud enough to ruin everybody elses day are cool, everyone else may they meet their end in a fiery accident underneath their bike and those that choose bikes because they are loud may they live long enough to see their loved ones die gruesome deaths.

Only good biker is a dead biker.

Or at the very least have someone hold their ears near a bikes exhaust and rev it up loud enough for them to become AT LEAST partially deaf and ideally with PTSD.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Steve came back from the morning ride and found the house empty.

Something was missing but he couldn't see what.

It took him a bit to realise that some items were missing and that the family pictures with Sandy were gone.

He rushed to the bedroom, opened the closet and noticed Sandy's clothes were gone.

The door bell rang. He rushed to the door, opened it and an officer was the door with a man in a suit. He was asked for id and after providing it, the officer took an envelope from the man in the suit and gave it to Steve saying "You are served."

Steve was in shock. He went to the kitchen, sat at the table, opened the envelope and inside he found divorce papers citing mental cruelty, abandonment a adultery. He also found pictures of him and Cindy from their date, affidavits from Cindy's coworkers and boss saying that she presented him as his boyfriend, while he talked about her being his girlfriend.

The papers talked about how he took family money against her wishes, him abandoning her and choosing to keep riding instead of staying with her.

That day the shock of it all was astounding. It didn't get any better. He tried to fight the divorce but found no support from Sandy or his kids.

It took time but his relationship with his kids became somewhat better but never the same. Sandy got the divorce and 60% of the assets due to the proven infidelity and his actions.

Initially he enjoyed his freedom but he soon got tired of coming home to an empty house. He tried things with Cindy and other women as well but nothing really came of it.

20 years had passed and Steve is home alone. He couldn't ride his bike any more due to an accident that nearly tore off his right leg. He needed a cane to move around.

Sandy met and married someone her age that was a lot more respectful than Steve. They bought an RV and they spent their retirement travelling the states.

When at home they each had their hobbies as well as some they shared. But at the end of the day, they chose each other's company.

They meet sometimes but they share only a polite greeting.

BSreaderBSreaderabout 1 month ago
Stupidest

Husband on earth

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