All Comments on 'Is She, Isn't She? Ch. 03'

I would love to hear this from Jeanie's point of view, but would be more than happy to read anything else you have to offer!

Actually one of the BEST stories on this entire website. Period. Beautifully realized and developed. Absolutely breathtaking!

i have never (and i do mean never) been as turned on by a story as i was by this one. AND i'm not even a girl on girl fan. Well done *claps* - absolutely fantastic bit of story telling!

FBG

This is, without a doubt, one of the best stories I have read on this site. I speak of the entire series. It ended up just as it should have! I love that, not only did Jeanie come to terms with her true feelings, but Ashley also saw where she went wrong. I am in love with both of your beautiful characters. :) Not to mention, I prefer stories with a "plot" rather than those that dive right into the sex.

I'm sad, though, that you haven't submitted any stories in almost two years. I would really love to read more. ~ L

I am the previous "anon" ... just have to post again as myself. This is probably my favorite story I've read so far, and the only one that I've read more than once. My crush on Ashley and Jeannie continues. :) ~ L

It's a great ending and that is my only regret that the story is over. It was so good, I'll read it again in the future. Thanks for sharing Harmony.

iv read this more then 10 times and i still cant get enough of it, Thankyou for writin this :D

That was, most assuredly, one of the best stories I've read here. The build up was perfect through all three Chapters and I would love to see where their lives take them. With Jeanie's impetuous and passionate nature I'm sure they would, at times, have high drama until she matures.

I can easily, because of the picture you painted for us, imagine them getting married, having children, and growing old together.

That was so fucking hot. The build up and level of description were superb. I could feel myself being drawn into their lives with ease, back in chapter 2 when Jeanie fucked the stripper my heart was pounding as I could feel what Ashley would be feeling. The emotional rollercoaster kept me gripped all throughout not to mention the image of those two sexy women fucking each others brains out. Please continue this story? Like how their friends react and how jeanie's parents would take to meeting Ashley. Thank you so much for writing this amazing story

I was hoping for at bigger ending, but I still loved it.

I read every single part of this story and loved it so much.. You did such a great job telling all of it.. I agree with others that i was looking for a bigger ending but it was a sweet and romantic story and an amazing write. :)

This has been the best story I've read in a long time. And I hope the author comes out more like it... :-)

This has been the best story I've read in a long time. And I hope the author comes out more like it... :-)

WTH?? come on... Ch.04? please...???

you got me hooked! i just can't get enough of it! :D

Full of emotion and craziness. I roleplay and this is along the lines of what I like. Chapter four please soon?

This was the best. Please continue!

Would love to see some sort of epilogue (like 5-10 years later) or something, just a page or 2. Great story!

Wow! I'm seriously lost for word! And what do you know, my name is Jeanie too and I struggled the same emotional issues as fictional Jeanie here! Except mine didn't end so well. But that aside, i LOVE your story! As if it was speaking for me. Anyway, please, oh PLEASE, ch. 4???? I'm dying inside when this story ended. So far, PERFECT JOB done :).

And btw, i love that you named Ashley's ex as Tasha, and let Tasha gets a hit in the face. Some bitchy person I know named Tasha as well, also should take a hit in her bloody face.

Cheers :)

this could be the best erotica ive ever read...

i could not stop reading. I had to finish and losing a nights sleep was worth it. This story was amazing and my stomach cringed from arousal through out the story. I loved it. Thank you

Exquisite, absolutely exquisite! Amazing take on the whole young-older woman and the scene with Jeanie licking Ashley on the couch while watching tv was absolutely amazing.. You truly managed to make a lot of fantasies come alive! great work, read all three parts in one sitting :)

Could do with a nice epilogue

That was amazing! I could just picture all of it. I couldn't stop

Reading! I was hooked. Amazing story!:)

Great fucking story.. Nd I mean it literally the sex was good, and the plot even better! I couldnt hold the applause this time lol ;)

I couldnt stop reading this!! One of the best stories ive ever read!!! Please CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

I have lost count of how many times I've read all three chapters. Ashley and Jeannie...what a beautiful character buildup, such a lovely romance. Once I start reading, I can't stop till it ends. Favorite part of the story, the last three pages where Jeannie confesses her love for Ashley. Bravo! Well done! These two have kept me company for many happy hours of reading! I know this is cliche but please write more of them if you can!

Are you sure you are not a professional writer? IMHO the best story here. I really would enjoy reading the follow up.

I wish your muse inspire you at leat once more.

Anyway great job until here.

I have read this story like 5 times and it still gets me. Pls I need more of your stories

That was so awesome ! Please write more , it's just so good.

1st I would like to thank you for almost making me late to write my differential calculus mid-term. literally walked into my class with 2 minuets to spare and horny as hell. because i just stumbled upon this wonderful story and just HAD to finish it.

came back to comment cause it was just too good not to comment on. loved it. great work harmonyhaze!

I really don't know how many times I've read this story

You're a brilliant writer!

This is my favorite story of this category! I've read it three times, and im sure it wont end there! Great work!

Loved reading these stories! Better than fifty shades of grey by a mile maybe you should carry on and get them published x

Enjoyed it! Read it a few times and it still makes me laugh and scream at the same time.Loved the emotional roller-coaster effect thanks

Usually I'm much more into the bdsm racket, but I must admit that this one had me from the start. A few grammatical errors (upon which I blame typos) aside, it was very well structured with fully believable characters and a slew of realism that I don't usually find in erotic works.

To put it simply: this is much better than the usual 'fuck, suck, and fuck some more' that I usually find.

Stellar even.

oh, and I'm referring to the entire work as a whole. Yes, I read it from start to finish in... three sittings. Just couldn't put it down.

First off, I love this series! It is the absolute best!

But it is all a but bittersweet considering that you haven't written anything in TWO YEARS! Wtf? Lol come on dude!

Hehe...Considering how over 100 people have practically begged you to continue this story, I don't think I'm even going to try. That was a fantastic story on all levels. HarmonyHaze, you are truely a talented writer and it is my sincere hope that your absense from this site means you have gone pro and you've been published,

Man , come on man ! This story so needs a part 4 , maybe even a 5 or 6? Please , do us this honor and continue this please

this is one of the best stories I've read I have read this story

Three times this was well written and I actually could imagine

The whole thing like I was sitting there with them very well written

Very very good 5stars for this I would give it a 100%

(JUST TIF)

loved this story!!!

It is certainly the best story I've ever read. There's hardly enough words to praise both the story and the writer. You are a natural writer Harmony. I just wonder why you are absent from here....we, your readers needs you to come back and write more.

You should write the next chapter to this story

fab!!!

This series is truly superior to all others on this site.I love how vivid the characters

are and the plot flows effortlessly combining both realistic and fantasy elements.

This one had me hooked from the get-go and the only thing that I can bitch about

is that the author has only posted this 3 parter. You have some serious talent young lady ,keep posting.

You should write how hey are doing now. I think us readers want to know , if Ashley and Jeanie got married .

Is She, Isn't She is absolutely fantastic! Your story flowed seamlessly and the characters were realistic and believable. I've read stories where character responses were a little difficult to believe but I really felt like I related to Ashley and Jeanie. Very sophisticated story and I'm hooked! We need more!

Would be awesome if you added a chapter 4......

I love these characters and this story.... Please please please give us more.

What a great poece of writing. Very real characters, VERY real passion, and I was rooting for Ashley and Jeanie since part 1. (Feel a bit bad about Tasha, though!)

Had to finish it once I started. It's hopeful, thoughtful and insightful. Quite a trick to pull something like that off. This is a story to be very proud of, Haze.

This series had me hooked from the beginning! I loved it! And it was realistic! Wish there was more!

This is the best story I have read on here, really well done

I just had to read it again! Lol it was that good!

OMG! hilarious... witty ...... entertaining... well written .. need i say more? what a euphoric conclusion. i definitely will be reading it over and over just to laugh at all the characters individual wit, charm and antics. I LOVED IT

nooOO! please more ms harmonyhaze... pretty please?

What a great series!! I'm sad now that it's over :(

Thank you Harmony Haze for sharing this with all of us.

We're getting a new chapter!!!!!! See the author bio!!!! Please, make it a new chapter and not an epilogue! Leave room for MORE!!!!!!)

I LOVE YOU, HARMONY! This is my favorite story on this entire site!!!!

The best story on here , all others bow down to her majesty.

Incredible....... congratulations...Wish there was a 10 to give you

Noooooooooooooo this has been my favorite series until now xD WHY DID IT HAVE TO END :((( please HarmonyHaze continue the story!! :)) it's a wonderful story, the descriptions, the characters are all so surreal, the plot twists! So unexpected! Everything about it is perfect!!!

This is one of the few stories i am magnetically drawn back to, again and again. Lost count of the many times i read it and it never ceases to amaze me. PERSONALLY, I think it is because of Ashley, shoo! what a HOTTIE but then again, so is Jeanie. mmm can't make up my mind, i think I'll take them both **wink** LOVE IT!

As I'm sure those read my comments around Literotica know, I'm a total sucker for happy endings. I got a little nervous with them coming together with a few pages to go, so happy things worked out.

Great story impressed very well written you should write a book if you havent already would like too know how there friends and family reacted and to go further with the story but liked it

I just keep coming back to this story, from page one right through to the end I was mesmerised and I have read this story so many times. I loved Jeanie, and I fell in love with Ashley, why can't real life be as entertaining.

Love the story! :-) now you should tell Jen side of the story, what she

was thinking

The best part of this story is the plot - I liked it a lot. But I think you missed the real ending. For example, I really would like to know the conclusion about Jeanie and Moronic Trio. Also about Jeanie and Ashley's friends - how the girl was accepted in to lesbian company? Or was she accepted at all? There are too many fun questions left unanswered.

But the story is still great.

I don't read this kind of stuff much but I'm really glad I gave this a read. I was totally taken in by this story, the characters and the plot, as well as the sexiness, really great writing. So pleased to see you're going to continue it, hope you can find the time to finish and post soon!

I loved your story, for a moment there you had me hanging. It was really good, glad Jeanie came around. Really like them as couple, if you ever write a sequel I would definitely come back and read it.

I loved it, Thank you

I read all of the stories but they were not in order I think numbers 2 and 3 were out of order and should have been switched otherwise it was a great story please continue it

I really liked this story in the beginning but the end/most of chapter 2 was really disappointing. I feel like Ashley cared about her/wanted to really get to know her in the beginning but it seems that it became all about lust/sex/control....I feel like Ashley treated Jeanie horribly-raping her with a dildo, basically forcing her fingers in her vagina, and Ashley's friends publicly humiliate Jeanie at the bar. After all that abuse she loves her???? And Jeanie does not seem to care about Ashley's feelings (which I understand a little more because she was confused) but in a short while for it to be "oh ok its fine nvm I love you" ....I feel like it was such a sweet relationship in the beginning to an abusive/taking advantage of one. Jeanie should of stood up for herself better and really made Ashley apologize,she FORCED A DILDO INTO HER and let all of her friends talk shit about her but apparently that is not being immature but "protective".

Great story

... your marketing skills suck!

With 600 comments on her last story and more people than I've ever seen on here anticipating the release of her new one, she kinda doesn't have to be a marketing genius. But then again, I can just imagine the number of people who will read it so maybe not an intentional marketing genius...but something's definitely working!

WSWS, taken down by lit.... what a disgrace!

With all the fans that you have, if you you choose to publish on another platform, let us know so we can still support your work.

Keep being awesome. ;)

What happened?

Some freeloaders complained about ch 4 not being for free so lit removed it. No more free limo scene.

go sale it on amazon or barns and noble if you want sales, literotica is supposed to be free literature!

Trying to get it back up. Thanks for supporting me :)

So ya ain't got a kindle and my phone is incompatible with the kindle app and I don't have no laptop. After all my efforts to try read the whole series I probably will never see how this story plays out :/... Sickened that they took all the other parts to this story down so now I can't even relive the moments. Hope you upload the whole story on to this site sometime. Until then I will keep checking everyonce in awhile. All the best Harmony don't let the take down of the other parts to this story let ya down I'd love to read your future work :). Lots of love and support, Lisa ( your big time Irish fan :D)

Send me your email ad and I'll send the first three chapters to you x

This series is awesome...thanks for introducing it here. I'm sorry for those individuals that can't purchase because they don't have the equipment. Well worth every penny!

dear harmony ..

i'm hera .. my country can't support to buy your ebooks .. please publish those ebooks in another site , such as google play books, kobo , and smashwords .. i will happily to buy those ebooks of you harmony .. please I'm dying waiting :( ..

from your big fans in indonesia , southeast asia ..

Harmony, i just want to let you know that your story is the best lesbian romance story I have ever read. So fluid, beautifully constructed, engaging and funny. I adore both girls, Ashley and Jeanie. I bought the sequel book in amazon and totally loved it. Best ending to their saga. I thought you cannot top ISIS but WSWS did it. Thanks for the story. Will you ever be making a part III? It will take time, I know, but Im a big fan of your writing so I am willing to wait for any updates or any new works you are currently doing. Keep it up.

Will wsws ever going back up in Lit? I can't buy them on amazon, not available in my country.

You are trying to profit by advertising your stories on their site. By withholding the last part of the story from this site then advertising the sale on Amazon and you don't see that as wrong? I don't blame you for wanting to protect your work and I doubt that Literotica blames you for it either but you went about it the wrong way. It's like you kidnapped your own story and now you're holding it for ransom. I sure that isn't your intention but that is how it looks. This is advertised as a free site and Lit is protecting themselves and their readers and rightfully so. I'm not sure that you were legal in doing that. Maybe you should see about getting your work copyrighted before you post here and then if someone steals your work you can file suite against them.

PLEASE you have to make wsws available to asia- I'll buy it in a heartbeat. This is simply just amazing!

If you've loved this story up to the end of this section, DONT read Part 4! The fourth part is a start of a new story arc, unfinished (one page) that sets up an entirely new conflict between Ashley and Jeannie.

The story arc concludes very nicely at the end of Part 3, so if you want a satisfactory conclusion to the story, do yourself a favor and assume it ends here.

To the annoymous person who encouraged people to stop reading. The story does not end here Harmony actually continued the story. It's call will she, won't she and it's available on amazon. It's excellent and we'll worth the couple of bucks.

come on I know there is only 4 parts in this serious, but really 8 pages of this and the last one was 9

It's worth taking the time to read all the pages.This is truly a work of art.

Literotica,please Repost "Will She, Won't She?"

Um, Anon, are you really asking Lit staff to commit copyright infringement by posting one of their authors stories without consent and against her wishes?

Can you see why that would be mind bogglingly stupid on their part?

I am still grieving the loss of HarmonyHaze writing!😢. Those were some good ole funny days and comments waiting on chapters to be uploaded! I sometimes wonder if she has continued writing elsewhere - I miss her work - truly a talent! Regardless of how it ended with this site, she certainly made her mark as one of THE best.

Harmony did write to the Moderators of Literotica asking them to reconsider posting the first 3 Chapters of WSWS.

This information was in Harmony's Bio sometime last year.

Only the beginning of it though, 3 chapters I'd guess makes it about a third of the way through (though that limo scene is crazy hot). The phrasing implied implications publishing the whole thing here, not the free teaser that was up.

In any case, I have had for some time now the kindle release of wsws and I've no hesitation in recommending buying it. Seriously, it's well worth a few bucks and most of the steamy sex is in the later chapters anyway, the first part is equally enjoyable setup and story.

Vggirl08, I miss those days too. Some of those comments were hilarious. It was like our own WSWS community.

I also hope Harmony continues to write.

This story has been up here for years and it never gets old I remember reading this like 4 years. It definitely belongs up here in the hall of fame .....

You simply can't help but re read it over and over again

she tried to sell thru literotica

This story has been on here for so long and people still comment to this day. I end up back on here re-reading this story all the time. Then reading Will She Won't She

I honestly have to say I completely feel in love with it. From start to finish. The character devolpemet and the story plot. You really wrote this exceptionally well Harmony. This is a story I'll always come back too.

Omfg this was so good!!! When they fought in the beginning,i felt like i was in that position and was like tearing up. This is a 20/10. I love the story and not like straight to sex scenes. Please do more like these!!! Ughhh beautiful.

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